Oh that's just cruel, leaving it there, AND telling us you're going away, lol. Never mind, it'll make the next chapter even better when you get to post it. Ahh, so Ben is FBI, awesome, I hope he gets Josh and makes him suffer!! Brilliant chapter, I love all the tension, and the way Jared got stabbed was very original, brilliantly written, that scene. :D Have a good holiday.
I am guessing Steve either works for the FBI and has been investigating Josh or he has been giving Ben information, either way I love him for it! I am not sure Chrisis going to be too happy though! Josh in the end was a complete coward. Thinking he killed the love of his life he still thought of one person - himself! He was totally deranged by the end of it. I am glad that Jared was finally showing some fight against him, not just being too scared. I just hope they are in time to save him but something tells me it will all work out! I just want to se Josh and Diane get their just desserts. I want to see Diane end up with nothing. Looking forward to more when you can post again - enjoy your road trip!
i am crying.again. that was the saddest chapter and the saddest almost death scene that i have read ever! i have gossebumps all over my body. but hey...jensen came for jared. the whole time i held my breath and i could see it right in front of me how they all were in the water in the middle of the night...and how jay fell into the knife. i couldnt breath. you are really a genius. it kills me to wait so long for the next great chapter but i also wish you a lot of fun. and be sure that i will stick with you and your great story! i just cant wait to read more! like i said...have fun! and dont forget us!!!^^
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Ahh, so Ben is FBI, awesome, I hope he gets Josh and makes him suffer!!
Brilliant chapter, I love all the tension, and the way Jared got stabbed was very original, brilliantly written, that scene. :D
Have a good holiday.
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More is on the way!
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that was the saddest chapter and the saddest almost death scene that i have read ever!
i have gossebumps all over my body.
but hey...jensen came for jared.
the whole time i held my breath and i could see it right in front of me how they all were in the water in the middle of the night...and how jay fell into the knife.
i couldnt breath.
you are really a genius.
it kills me to wait so long for the next great chapter but i also wish you a lot of fun.
and be sure that i will stick with you and your great story!
i just cant wait to read more!
like i said...have fun!
and dont forget us!!!^^
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More will be up real soon!!!!
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