Series: 9/12 Matt is, Mohinder isn't

[baehj2915]

 
Title: Have You Met My Serial Killer?

Series Title(s): The ‘Matt is, Mohinder isn’t’ Series; Section Three: Denial, or Not a River at All

Author: JLB

Pairing: Matt/Mohinder, discussion of Mohinder/Sylar

Rating: R for almost sex and lots and lots of swearing

Disclaimer: Oh man, what am I gonna do with all this money that I’m making from slash? Wait.

Comments

[rogueslayer452]

Oh wow. That was intense, and while I'm like "NOO!" at the mild destruction of the domesticness of these two for the moment, I am glad that there is some tension between them regarding the past relationships issue. Mohinder had to deal with Matt and Janice, and now Matt has to deal with Mohinder and Sylar (though I have to say, yay for Mylar resurfacing!) Of course, Matt's reaction is a little more with the anger than the angst, it's still a real kind of emotion especially when you're in a relationship like this

[baehj2915]

realism! whoo hoo!

thank you very muchly for the wonderful comment and the angsty mohinder icon to accompany it!

JLB

[clarkangel]

WOW! So did not expect this, but it's very realistic. This is how people fight. This is how it happens and how it feels. Very intense. And well done. And easy to deal with since I know things will be better soon. Right????

[baehj2915]

i make no promises... but yes. i'm a big softie, yes of course they make up soon. :D

thank you thank you!

[shaka_chan]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

T_T

Making your readers emo aside, this was a brilliant chapter. Keep it up, I'm really loving this fic. :3

[baehj2915]

i'm glad my fic brings joy. thank you for commenting!

[kleenexcow]

OH MY GOD MATT AND I ARE NO LONGER FRIENDS!!!
I am extremely, extremely ticklish, and anytime someone discovers this fact and uses it to torment me, as soon as they are done I will get up and leave and not speak to them again until they call me and apologize. It's pretty much the most serious offense anyone can commit against me. So I feel for Mohinder.

Annnnnywho, I really enjoyed this section a lot. Their argument was really good, and realistic. I really can understand both of their perspectives. Mohinder's a little skank whore, isn't he? But then again, we're all entitled to mistakes. Anyway, believable dialoge from both of them. Gold star!

"Okay, that wasn’t even in English," he said haughtily.
Made me giggle.

<3<3<3<3<3<3

[baehj2915]

hello ticklish friend! me too, but i don't take that seriously. maybe i should. many many times in my life has my brother tickled to the point of exhaustion because i just couldn't breathe.

and thank you for the love! *puts gold star on laptop*

JLB

[out_there]

Points for that argument. Having someone who can read your mind -- and all the horrible possibilities involved in that when truly angry and fighting -- could be really hard and you showed it well.

[baehj2915]

how many points?

;D

thanks for reading and commenting, my beloved repeat reviewer!