El Dorado

Jun 06, 2017 08:00

Prompt#: 99
Title: El Dorado
Word Count: 7874
Side Pairing(s): None
Rating: PG-13
Warning(s):[click to open]No warnings apply, unless mopey dragons count.
Disclaimer: The celebrities' names/images are merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrities are in real life. No offense is intended towards them, their families or friends. The original characters ( Read more... )

[round 3], bae2017, day 23, rating: pg-13, word count: -10000

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lazyscrawls June 6 2017, 00:50:26 UTC
this was short but so cute i wish there was more haha

also “Weepy dragon.” cracked me up more than i expected LOL i feel so bad for baekhyun he's so lonely

the last line was so beautifully written

thank you for writing this xx

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ichigotabetai June 13 2017, 23:18:33 UTC
:) thank you.

Baekhyun is a tad too lonely but well, he has a persistent human on his tail now so all is well. Or will be.

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ext_3207582 June 6 2017, 06:07:43 UTC
Awww this is so cute 💕 that part where deer baekhyun is following chanyeol is so adorable because i feel like he already likes chanyeol in that part TT imagine living for years alone, it must be so hard for baekhyun but atleast, he already has chanyeol to accompany him.

anyway, your writing is really nice and the story is cute. nice job, author nim.

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ichigotabetai June 13 2017, 23:19:43 UTC
Thank you, bb ! And yes, deer!Baek latched onto Chanyeol because maybe he sensed he was a good human being inside, sharp weapons aside.

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anonymous June 6 2017, 07:40:37 UTC
That is soo cutee ㅠㅅㅠ
I feel sad for baekhyun.. hm.. I wonder who was his mate.. I was imagining kai but kai is another character here.. hm..
Thanks for the story !! I wish there are more of this au.. I really really love it ^^
Take care !!

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ichigotabetai June 13 2017, 23:20:11 UTC
Ah, but his mate could be anybody. I leave it upto your imagination.

Thank you !

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rixxanna June 6 2017, 10:57:52 UTC
awww I like thissss a lotttt. its not long but have a lot of things inside. I like the way chanyeol pursued Baekhyun in the end so he's not lonely anymore. I feel sad for Baekhyun as well because he is sad and alone but yet he believes in chanyeol since the beginning. all their conversation was so fun to be read and the flows are great to be followed. nice one~ great job authornim!

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ichigotabetai June 13 2017, 23:30:14 UTC
it's not long, I agree but I like to think that it's...enough. Yes, that's the word I want.

Baek, I think has no opportunity to be lonely any longer. ^_^ Yeolface has arrived !

Thank you.

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emycyingztars June 7 2017, 04:04:12 UTC
Bickering fantasy!au chanbaek always manages to make me laugh omg
Thank you for writing this! It made my day knowing that Baekhyun can feel warm and loved again

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ichigotabetai June 13 2017, 23:31:07 UTC
Lol, they do bicker. Now imagine if they were together....eyyy, the bickering would be endless unless they kissed ofc. XD

Thank you.

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