Bad, bad bathhouse

Oct 08, 2010 10:41


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If you were none of these (24/?) anonymous May 5 2012, 19:46:54 UTC
They’re keeping Shirogane in the dungeon, tied up to Yukiko’s throne. The room’s roughed up. This is where they kept Teddie, before they gave up and left him in the strange bedroom with the scarf. There are red marks on Shirogane’s wrist. He’s not thrashing around anymore, but when Yosuke shows up with Nanako, he says, “I see that you have moved onto kidnapping children ( ... )

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If you were none of these (31/?) anonymous March 31 2013, 02:58:23 UTC
She rolls her shirt back into place.

“You’re lucky,” she says, “that I’m trying to save your life, you jerk, or you’d be known as the kind of guy who feels up girls!”

“I was proving a point,” he says, but guiltily. He rubs his face. As he shifts his hair around, his atma shows up, high on his forehead, on the left side. “They didn’t ‘save’ you, Kujikawa-san. Not if they have passed on their… condition to you.”

“You don’t understand,” she says. “I was already infected by the time they reached me. You can feel it, can’t you? If you starve yourself, you’ll go berserk and kill everyone here. Souji-senpai and the others, they’re doing their best to keep themselves under control so they can catch the real murderer.”

“I knew it,” he says, off to the side.

“Knew-knew what?”

“You’re soliciting me,” he says. “You are trying to gain my cooperation. But you are only doing it so I won’t prosecute you and bring you to justice-”

“‘Justice?’” she says, loudly. “What we’re doing is“Is it?” he says. “You kidnap and blackmail. You kidnap ( ... )

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If you were none of these (32/?) anonymous March 31 2013, 07:47:50 UTC
It rains.

But what’s the point? They’re caught and found out. She’s just blown her cover on Shirogane, hoping that he’d understand instead of being a huge prick.

Rise watches the Midnight Channel anyway. She’s tired and still hungry. Her scars aches. Her sleeves smell like meat. At midnight, a fuzzy shape shows up-but she can’t tell what it is. Then is the news, claiming that they’ve solved the freak murder cases happening in town…

She rests in the bed and breathes shallowly. As she drifts off to sleep, she remembers that Shirogane’s flowers are still in her bag. She forgot to give them to him.

*

give in(the rescue remix/7) “Hi guys,” Rise says when she steps into the TV ( ... )

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If you were none of these (33/?) anonymous March 31 2013, 07:48:49 UTC
“But they sent the police after Yukiko-san when they thought she vanished, right?” Yosuke said. “And they had Adachi-san for Rise-chan ( ... )

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If you were none of these (34/?) anonymous March 31 2013, 07:50:30 UTC
He doesn’t hold her too tightly. She swallows down her hunger and focuses not on his warmth or his smell, but on the demon she can feel. His atma is on the back of his neck, perfectly centered and tempting. Even through the whole width of his body, she can feel its warmth ( ... )

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Re: If you were none of these (34/?) anonymous April 14 2013, 08:48:00 UTC
I'm late to these updates, but: ahhhh, thank you so very much for continuing. Still loving this, still looking forward to more.

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Re: If you were none of these (34/?) anonymous April 14 2013, 19:05:37 UTC
This is making me feel FEELINGS. Love it and eagerly awaiting the conclusion! <333

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If you were none of these - info for future updates! anonymous April 30 2013, 05:10:41 UTC
I've thought about it a lot, and I've decided to post updates to AO3 instead of LJ for a few reasons:
* the ao3 has the final version of previous chapters
* the previous chapters have a few differences in scene+tone that I'm working from that don't make sense if you're reading off the bathhouse
* convenience

I've posted it to an anonymous collection, and will be "deanoning," so to speak, once I've finished the fic. Hope to see you there!

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