I HAVE NO DUNGEON, AND I MUST TROLL (39a/40)
anonymous
April 23 2012, 00:12:01 UTC
Souji looks terrible. Nervous. Tired.
"What's the matter?"
He shakes his head, blinks, and licks his lips. "I--I couldn't help but notice, in your e-mail…." He blinks again, and scrubs at his mouth. "You didn't actually say you wanted to…to have me in your life."
Yosuke looks down at his hands. "No. I guess I didn't."
Silence stretches between them, chilly and uncomfortable. Downstairs, Dad's puttering about, making more noise than he probably needs to. Making his presence known, no doubt: that's right, kids; I'm home--no funny business. Souji gets an orange prescription bottle out of his jacket pocket, and sets it down on the night-table, with a quiet clack.
"What--?"
"I stole this," he says.
"Uh…okay?"
"Really?"
"No!" Yosuke snatches the bottle. "Fuck that--not okay! Why would you…where'd you even
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Re: I HAVE NO DUNGEON, AND I MUST TROLL (40c/40)
anonymous
May 10 2012, 08:59:47 UTC
Thank you anon for such an amazing story. I loved reading every part of it and as somebody above said, this is one story I wanted to finish reading on the meme (I've been on here way too long too). Its a shame you can't repost it elsewhere with the formatting but I'll still keep the link saved. There are a few truly epic takes crafted on this meme, and this has got to be one of the best. Thanks again and good luck with any future endeavours! :)
Re: I HAVE NO DUNGEON, AND I MUST TROLL (40c/40)
anonymous
June 21 2013, 12:20:18 UTC
Hey there! So, I don't know if you're still checking responses to this fill (probably not, after over a year) . . . but if by any chance you see this comment, I'm the anon who asked about whether you were going to repost this fic elsewhere, and I have a question! I had some free time on my hands recently, so I converted this fill into a html document, just so that I'd have a pretty and readable version of it on my computer without all the LJ threading. Now it's just sitting on my computer, but I'm wondering--would you be okay with me possibly sharing it with other people? It's properly attributed to you and includes a link to the original meme thread, and I wouldn't be hosting it as a webpage, just uploading the file to mediafire or something so that interested parties can download it
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Re: I HAVE NO DUNGEON, AND I MUST TROLL (40c/40)
anonymous
June 28 2013, 17:08:17 UTC
Just came across this, and got so caught up in the story that I read it all in one setting. Anon, you are crazy and BRILLIANT. I love Souji and Yosuke (which is saying a lot, because he's the type of character I usually cannot stand, and yet you made me adore him the most) and Yosuke's dad and everyone in this fic, and I love what you did at the end. It felt like we went on a journey together, and a very entertaining, satisfying one too.
Re: I HAVE NO DUNGEON, AND I MUST TROLL (40c/40)
anonymous
January 6 2014, 02:06:35 UTC
Okay, I'm probably waaaay too late, but I really love this! I was really rooting for your Yosuke because he's my favourite character - and one I've always sympathised with - and you just write him so perfectly. I don't often bookmark fics, but this one went straight into the folder.
Also, surprised myself when I realised I was actually rooting for Yosuke/Kanji because I've never even considered it. This is all just so goooooood
"What's the matter?"
He shakes his head, blinks, and licks his lips. "I--I couldn't help but notice, in your e-mail…." He blinks again, and scrubs at his mouth. "You didn't actually say you wanted to…to have me in your life."
Yosuke looks down at his hands. "No. I guess I didn't."
Silence stretches between them, chilly and uncomfortable. Downstairs, Dad's puttering about, making more noise than he probably needs to. Making his presence known, no doubt: that's right, kids; I'm home--no funny business. Souji gets an orange prescription bottle out of his jacket pocket, and sets it down on the night-table, with a quiet clack.
"What--?"
"I stole this," he says.
"Uh…okay?"
"Really?"
"No!" Yosuke snatches the bottle. "Fuck that--not okay! Why would you…where'd you even ( ... )
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Also, surprised myself when I realised I was actually rooting for Yosuke/Kanji because I've never even considered it. This is all just so goooooood
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