A Vestige

Apr 22, 2011 22:47

Title: A Vestige
Summary: It's difficult to move on when things from the past keep popping up in your head.
Fandom: Inception
Characters/Pairings: Ariadne/Eames, Arthur
Genre: Romance, Angst
Rating/Warnings: G/character death
Word Count: 1028
Author's Notes: Written for kissoffools; prompt used was Remember by Christina Rossetti. I'm terribly sorry that it's ( Read more... )

community: npmexchange, character: arthur, character: ariadne, form: fanfiction, contains: sexual themes, rating: g, character: eames, pairing: ariadne/eames, fandom: inception, warning: character death, genre: angst, genre: romance

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novelized April 22 2011, 15:48:28 UTC
i love your writing!

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pointblankdarcy April 23 2011, 07:07:27 UTC
Thank you for that wonderfully kind comment!

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kissoffools April 22 2011, 21:03:15 UTC
OHHHHHHHHHH Nadia!!!!!!!!! Nadia!!

This is so beautiful. So achingly beautiful. I love the way it was Ariadne and Eames with some shades of Arthur mixed in there, because those three are my absolute favourites. I love your writing - your prose is beautiful and the dialogue fits. Like, this part:

"I do hope that your studies go well and that you've taken away valuable lessons in not being like Arthur and being like me."

It's so Eames and I adore it. And this here:

Then Eames is pressing her into the mattress and she arches and he bends so deeply and softly into her until she's nothing but a voice crying out into the shadows of his shoulder.This is sexier than any drawn-out porn could be. It makes wonderful images, and it's exactly the type of writing that I love ( ... )

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pointblankdarcy April 23 2011, 07:09:48 UTC
EEE JANNA I was snickering behind my monitor when I saw your username at the exchange and then later at the wilderness activity XD

I'm so glad that you liked it! I wanted to do something poetic in prose~ and this just wrote itself when I was half-asleep. Thank you for your lovely prompts and your comments :D

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pointblankdarcy May 3 2011, 08:11:13 UTC
TEEEHEEE. I do my best work during late hours of the night, it seems. I'm terribly proud of that line :)

Thank you so much!

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