Mpreg, anyone?

[iratus_lupus]

Lost in the Void » by EternityRose reviews

everthing is prefect. That's good then. Riku and Sora are togeter and best of all, Sora is pregnont! He's WHAT?! but Riku's lost love Kiara my made up is reterning to Desteny Ilands. Sentence structure fail. What choas will esnue? Esnue? O.o JUST REED I SUCH AT SUMMERYS! Spellcheck is your friend.

This is

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[violetxfires]

"Mufasa."
"Ooh, say it again."
"MUFASA."
"Ooh-ooh, say it again!"
"Mufasa, Mufasa, MUFASA!"

Sorry, had to.

[ran_mouri82]

Sadly, that's much better than this fic. ^^*

[pyrocrastinator]

“Every woman is whore”

Lawl. That sentence made me think: "Ah, Rorschach's first attempt at fanfiction."

I DID NOT WANT TO ASSOCIATE LION KING WITH... THIS.

And dude. That keyblade is pretty messed up...

[love_jackianto]

'Lawl. That sentence made me think: 'Ah, Rorschach's first attempt at fanfiction.'
You beat me to it! :D

[ketsi_aiita_n]

“Hold me forever! HOLD ME FOREVER, RIKU.”

Epic icon.

[hw221]

[anonymous]

This was written by either a 12 year old or a troll.

[ribbon_scythe]

Riku took Sora into his arms. “Yes you are.” Riku felt a feeling of lust go up his spine. “YES SORA YOU ARE!”

Um...okay...it made me laugh though.

“One of the keyblade's powers is to make me transgendored...I didnt know it untillll now...”

Here's what I never understood: if you like these characters together, why do you have to turn one into a girl? I mean you liked them together when they're both boys right? I guess that's one of those YMMV kind of things, but in this story it seems more for convenience than as a true plot point of consequence. Of course I shouldn't expect logic from someone who ships Riku/Sora but says lesbians are "EWWWW!" and then writes them later on in her story.

And I really thought Kiara was just misspelled Kairi in this fic...I was hoping she was.

[ran_mouri82]

Ugh, I smelled OC!Sue as far back as the summary. Oh, wait, "SUMMERYS!"

And obviously, that person doesn't know what a hermaphrodite is.