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dancingspiral February 8 2009, 06:15:50 UTC
What? What?

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ran_mouri82 February 8 2009, 06:31:46 UTC
Yes. Believe it, or not.

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mikalia_w February 8 2009, 06:21:45 UTC
How...craptastic.

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ran_mouri82 February 8 2009, 06:32:31 UTC
One minor consolation: at least they didn't break out into song.

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ran_mouri82 February 9 2009, 00:22:22 UTC
Inorite?

This doesn't scrape the bottom of the barrel compared to other fics posted here, but the fact it so blatantly transforms the main characters into a Mary Sue/Marty Stu pairing equals epic fail.

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prettyzombiegrl February 8 2009, 12:06:18 UTC
Being a Sailor Moon fan...that Serena was absolutely, nothing like the Serena from Sailor Moon. Might as well be an OC. So depressing!

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ran_mouri82 February 9 2009, 00:16:14 UTC
SRSLY. The fact they stole a line from Aladdin tells all.

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prettyzombiegrl February 9 2009, 00:18:24 UTC
Haha it's completely messed up in so many ways! I weep.

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rose_cat February 8 2009, 14:56:56 UTC
This story is, um, all wet. (sorry)

I've never heard of a "cinched" body, either. Sounds painful.

"Uses girls like paper and just as quickly, too."

My mind went straight to toilet paper. Way to be romantic, Darian.

Mary Suemaid! *snerk* You're a brave mer-sporker :)

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vail_kagami February 8 2009, 19:50:49 UTC
"Uses girls like paper and just as quickly, too."

My thought was more like: What a stupid comparison to use under the bloody sea.
Do they even know what paper is?

Although, considering that, toilet paper might just be the word...

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ran_mouri82 February 9 2009, 00:13:37 UTC
O.O

I never thought of that. *SHOT*

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rose_cat February 9 2009, 08:42:20 UTC
What a stupid comparison to use under the bloody sea.

Yeah. Is it waxed paper? :D I read some of the complete spork at her journal and it's even worse. One minute Mary Suemaid is holding her breath under water, the next she's shopping and chatting with no need to breathe. Lame all around.

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