This doesn't scrape the bottom of the barrel compared to other fics posted here, but the fact it so blatantly transforms the main characters into a Mary Sue/Marty Stu pairing equals epic fail.
What a stupid comparison to use under the bloody sea.
Yeah. Is it waxed paper? :D I read some of the complete spork at her journal and it's even worse. One minute Mary Suemaid is holding her breath under water, the next she's shopping and chatting with no need to breathe. Lame all around.
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This doesn't scrape the bottom of the barrel compared to other fics posted here, but the fact it so blatantly transforms the main characters into a Mary Sue/Marty Stu pairing equals epic fail.
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I've never heard of a "cinched" body, either. Sounds painful.
"Uses girls like paper and just as quickly, too."
My mind went straight to toilet paper. Way to be romantic, Darian.
Mary Suemaid! *snerk* You're a brave mer-sporker :)
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My thought was more like: What a stupid comparison to use under the bloody sea.
Do they even know what paper is?
Although, considering that, toilet paper might just be the word...
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I never thought of that. *SHOT*
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Yeah. Is it waxed paper? :D I read some of the complete spork at her journal and it's even worse. One minute Mary Suemaid is holding her breath under water, the next she's shopping and chatting with no need to breathe. Lame all around.
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