Oh, FF VII, you cheat me so~~~

[lightrobber]

Let me tell you this: When I set my eyes on this little something (which happened on 05-09-08 if we want to be precise), it only had two chapters. Now there are four.
And the infamous Flame Rising has already caught sight of this fic too.Not as much of a badfic as some rather awkward descriptions and such. And blatant plagiarism starting chapter

Comments

[kiffkin]

Okay, so while there's plenty to spork here (and there really is a lot), you're pointing out "a stiff breeze", "cream hair" and "language" as examples. Because, it's not like words can have more than one meaning which we ascertain through context or anything, right?

Now, if you were sporking "a stiff breeze flowed by" or yet another overly-detailed and utterly pointless hair description, I could understand. Or mentioning that the author asks for detailed information on FF7 as they know nothing about it. Being petty about the few bits that actually make sense is just, well, petty.