Sues, Random Plots, and Vampires, Oh My!

[death_note13]

So, browsing the Cirque du Freak fandom, I came along these two fics...let's get started, eh?

The first one is called: secrets (nope, there are no capitals..)

There's lots of sues in my fandom...this one, isn't a sue..it's just...bad.

crystal was sitting in the front row of luke's live show there was an empty seat next to her she noticed that one of

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[death_note13]

. . . He picked her light head up . . .

Her head is light? Does she not have anything going on up there? That would explain some things . . .

Possibly so. But remember, when she's asked some random question, she'll pull the answer outta her ass, and be right. Even if her head is light...which btw, WTF?

Forgot that...thanks for picking it up. Was blinded by Mr. Crepsley's blantant OOC-ness and all. =D

[aviceonion]

I may have only read the first three books, but I DO know Mr. Crepsley well enough to see he isn't in character at ALL.

And I was hoping this new fandom of mine could somehow magically not catch the horrible grammar-flu. >.<''