Ten chapters of madness.

[msmanuscript]

And I just could not look away. It was so bad that I just could not tear my eyes away from the screen. "Blind" is a Gorillaz fic about 2D needing surgery on his eyes because the blood clots that are making his eyes black will leave him blind soon. (To be fair, he should be anyway, but it's Gorillaz.) So Noodle, now twenty one, is taking care of

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[emo_in_a_turtle]

It screams weebo.

[trillianastra]

....somehow, what bothers me the most is the total lack of contractions. It's weird.

[msmanuscript]

I kind of understand it when Noodle talks, it's very common with new English speakers. But D speaks almost PERFECTLY it throws me off every time.

[akaihikari]

*HEADDESK* One of the reasons I tend to stay in the MurdocxNoodle fics is because this generally doesn't happen. GENERALLY. I've seen some god-awful summaries that I can't bring myself to click on, but this GENERALLY doesn't happen.

Still though... Weebo, badly voiced 2D, OOC Noodle (and that's pretty bad, because Noodle's personality is kind of all over the place). But it's not horrid enough to be a troll. Hurgh...

[4eyedblonde]

dear god what did i just read?

[hw221]

I'm disturbed.
But I <3 your icon.

[msmanuscript]

Thank you!