Detonation

[badboy_fangirl]

Title: Detonation
Author: domfangirl
Fandom: Burn Notice
Characters/Pairing: Fiona POV, Michael/Fiona
Rating: R
Warnings: Spoilery for all seasons, up through 3x11, Friendly Fire
Summary: Fiona has loved Michael for far longer than she has wanted to, or would admit to, or even acknowledges.
Author's Notes: I've wanted to try writing Fiona for a while, and

Comments

[lizbet0]

I think you've done a great job writing Fiona! I love how she compares life events to C-4 and other explosives! {giggle} And this is a beautifully heart-breaking image: No doubt she'll watch him die, and then she'll pick up the gun that lies in the shadow of his body and go out in a blaze of glory with him.

I really enjoy how the show manages to illustrate that she and Michael care very much about each other, but their natures and the nature of their work make it very unlikely they'll have a "happily ever after." (And white picket fences, kids & dogs ain't never happening with these two!) I think your story captured that dynamic very well.

I also loved your "Food for Thought" side bar. Thank you for that soul-meal as well!

[badboy_fangirl]

Oh, thank you. I agree, Michael and Fiona are pretty tragic in the scheme of things. Glad this captures that aspect of them.

Thanks for commenting on my side-bar! I always wonder if anyone ever reads that! :D

[petunia846]

Just found this and love it. Love the description of the exploding truck and just all their issues. For some reason I'm having a hard time articulating what's so great about this, so suffice it to say that it's excellent. Thanks for sharing.

[badboy_fangirl]

Thank you! I'm glad someone found it. I've not written much BN fic, but I love Michael and Fi. The show will be back in a little over a month! Yay!