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badbadbathhouse

and doesn't the number six sound a lot like...? ;*

Oct 08, 2010 13:53

Oh my, everyone has been so patient. I take such a long time to hit my "peak," if you will, so I apologize for the delay!

SHIN MEGAMI TENSEI: PERSONA 4 KINK MEME
PART SIXAs all you charming little anonymous know, in this very post of mine, you can comment anonymously with any pairing from Persona 4 and whatever astoundingly perverse or adorably ( Read more... )

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Pretty little thing [2/6] anonymous October 24 2010, 20:20:18 UTC

A couple of hours later he’s pressed up against the kitchen wall, Adachi’s arms keeping him trapped. This time he kisses back, shame and arousal mingling in his belly to the point where he doesn’t know which is which, but it soothes over the panic that boils beneath. His knees nearly buckle when Adachi shoves a leg between his, his skinny thigh rubbing against Souji’s crotch and making him hard in record time.

A few meters away Dojima is snoring on the couch.

“I can’t help myself,” Adachi says, a quiet mumble in Souji’s ear. “And neither can you, it seems.”

Souji’s all but humping Adachi’s thigh.

He hadn’t even noticed.

When he freezes up, Adachi’s hands slip down to his hips, pulling him closer, urging him to continue. It takes a moment for him to understand-his brain is far too busy trying to take in the sensation of Adachi working his hips for him-but in the end he gives in and starts moving again.

He doesn’t really want to, he doesn’t even want to be there; he doesn’t want Adachi’s tongue tickling the roof of his mouth and ( ... )

Re: Pretty little thing [6/6] anonymous October 25 2010, 23:43:27 UTC

Oh god. That last sentence brought a coupla tears to my eyes, anon.

There are no words for this.

It is just so

so

<33333

You wrote Adachi PERFECTLY. Like, guhhh.

SPEECHLESS, ANON, YOU'VE RENDERED ME SPEECHLESS. Your writing/style is fucking awesome. * A*

writer!anon anonymous October 27 2010, 18:16:11 UTC

Thank you!!! I love Adachi to bits but I was terrified of writing him, afraid I'd get him all wrong. Your comment makes me ridiculously happy!
Really glad you enjoyed it. 8D

OP anonymous October 26 2010, 13:29:05 UTC

I'm sorry I'm a little late, but I just read this and... I don't even know what to say! This is so much better than I could imagine! I know that probably all I'm going to say is already on the comments above, but I love the way you wrote Adachi and the flipping masks. I can't help but think the part when they're on Souji's room fits a request I didn't make, but wanted to see filled really badly, about dirty talk gone too far. It was incredbly hot, by the way ♥
And when I finished reading the last line my heart skipped a beat. Oh, Souji ;_;
Thank you very much for filling this! I can see I'm going to re-read it many times... (:

writer!anon anonymous October 27 2010, 18:05:36 UTC

I'm sorry I'm a little late with a reply myself!

Really glad you liked it and I appreciate your comment a lot. :D I was pretty worried about my Adachi, so it's sweet to hear you liked him. :)

I saw that prompt and adored it immediately! I love dirty talk, and dirty talk gone wrong is just so... wrong. In a good way. Warms my heart this fill reminded you of it.

Thank you so much!

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