Fail drabble from me. Have been trying to get started on the genderbender fic idea that I've had and was happy at this current prompt, but alas, it seems that Crack AU is synonymous with terrible OOC, so apologies all around
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I thought you were actually trying to make Keigo's name sound feminine. (Asane actually sounded like girl's name, ahahahah)
However, I find it really distracting that, even though you named male!Orihime as Sora, you still used She and Orihime to refer to HIM? Is this really genderbending? I thought it was really unclear on exactly who got genderbent (just Orihime or is it everyone?) or whether it even happened at all except for the odd fact that Keigo called Orihime 'Sora'.
Anyway, I don't know if it's just me, but I've read your piece about 3 times already, and I'm still a bit clueless what the point was.
(Also, note to mods: maybe we can have genderbending as a prompt for some other week? :D)
these stories are so short
anonymous
July 28 2010, 12:58:08 UTC
Every story I read is so good I want them to continue.... I'm not familiar w/the rules guidelines for the prompts, but is it a rule that the characters can't get to the romance? Last week's little fics included kisses/romance, but none of this week's fics get the that point in the relationship. The reader (me anyway) is left wanting more....
Re: these stories are so shortalienashiJuly 28 2010, 14:37:10 UTC
Nope, there's no rule whatsoever on how you write them, the most important thing is to include the relationship of Ichigo and Orihime as the main focus. As the theme for this week is Crack AU, the stories are crack and AU? There are always gonna be different themes for every week, so you'll be able to enjoy your weekly dose of IchiHime in every way *__*
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However, I find it really distracting that, even though you named male!Orihime as Sora, you still used She and Orihime to refer to HIM? Is this really genderbending? I thought it was really unclear on exactly who got genderbent (just Orihime or is it everyone?) or whether it even happened at all except for the odd fact that Keigo called Orihime 'Sora'.
Anyway, I don't know if it's just me, but I've read your piece about 3 times already, and I'm still a bit clueless what the point was.
(Also, note to mods: maybe we can have genderbending as a prompt for some other week? :D)
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