I dunno why it's taken me this long to get here. D: POV switch up next!gietheJuly 26 2010, 19:31:15 UTC
Ichigo watched, tensed, as the other auctions went up, bid for, and concluded. His hands were holding on so tightly onto the pouch of gold that Mizuiro wondered if the rings would end up misshapen. Just earlier, Ichigo had been counting it repeatedly until even Mizuiro had memorized the amount, but he only gave up when Sado reassured him. Typical Ichigo, Mizuiro nodded to himself. The boy wasn't keen on leading the household yet, and he tended to make rash decisions - but once he focused on a task, he worked as if his life depended on it. Isshin was proud that Ichigo was good at getting things done, but still skeptical of making Ichigo take on several jobs at once. "We will start at 10 kit of silver," announced the auctioneer, when they finally reached the girl he was waiting for. She was led to the platform and in better view of the crowd. Her eyes were wide with apprehension, but she kept her chin up and looked far above the top of their heads
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Insomnia = update. woo~gietheAugust 2 2010, 20:17:47 UTC
Inoue Orihime had always loathed and feared that silver-haired man in charge of the auctions. Ever since she had been sold to the Illusory Moon, his presence hung around her like a threat - like a swinging blade above her neck. She'd even heard stories from the other slaves - how he had almost broken a girl's mind the year before with mere words, or how his auction of his own slaves just some months ago contained flawed goods. "She was sold already pregnant," whispered one of the girls.
Orihime tried not to react when that same man held the cord bound around her neck and led her down the platform after the auction. He seemed to be incredibly amused by the turn of events, and had taken the task of leading her from the servant so that he could have a firsthand look at her.
"Ya paid Aizen-sama better than anythin' we've sold b'fore," he giggled, "I almost wish we got ya flawed, there's no knowin' what you'd have fetched on a daily basis"Gin, stop playing around," interrupted a man with dark skin and braided hair - Orihime forced
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just discovered what the word limit for comments aregietheAugust 2 2010, 21:08:33 UTC
Mayuri strode home quickly, oblivious to almost everything ever since the auction ended. Nemu tried to keep up with him by adopting a half-running, half-walking pace. Time and again, she gave him almost questioning glances
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Re: just discovered what the word limit for comments arenagicakesAugust 6 2010, 00:35:02 UTC
Holy crap, this is awesome! <333 Take your time, but I really hope that you continue this! Or even turn it into a full-fledged fanfic (it has so much potential!) Great job!
Man, maaru! I am loving this universe! Thanks so much for filling the prompt and for making it elaborate enough for several posts. Can't wait for your next update. Hope you get the time and inspiration soon! :D
By the way, if it's no trouble, mind if I ask for a title for this? I'll be pimping separate fills over at ichi_hime and at the FLOL bad_shield pimping thread and for easier compilation, a title would help tons.
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Typical Ichigo, Mizuiro nodded to himself. The boy wasn't keen on leading the household yet, and he tended to make rash decisions - but once he focused on a task, he worked as if his life depended on it. Isshin was proud that Ichigo was good at getting things done, but still skeptical of making Ichigo take on several jobs at once.
"We will start at 10 kit of silver," announced the auctioneer, when they finally reached the girl he was waiting for. She was led to the platform and in better view of the crowd. Her eyes were wide with apprehension, but she kept her chin up and looked far above the top of their heads ( ... )
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Orihime tried not to react when that same man held the cord bound around her neck and led her down the platform after the auction. He seemed to be incredibly amused by the turn of events, and had taken the task of leading her from the servant so that he could have a firsthand look at her.
"Ya paid Aizen-sama better than anythin' we've sold b'fore," he giggled, "I almost wish we got ya flawed, there's no knowin' what you'd have fetched on a daily basis"Gin, stop playing around," interrupted a man with dark skin and braided hair - Orihime forced ( ... )
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I hope you update again soon!
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Update, update, update ~
LOL take your time, but thanks for the story, it's really good <3333333
Your characterization are all so spot on!
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By the way, if it's no trouble, mind if I ask for a title for this? I'll be pimping separate fills over at ichi_hime and at the FLOL bad_shield pimping thread and for easier compilation, a title would help tons.
Thanks again for your contribution! :D
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:)
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