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bacterial

Feb 21, 2009 07:07

Comments 13

runawayblue February 21 2009, 07:14:01 UTC

This is fantastic. The second to last paragraph? Top-notch.
You've got a talent, my friend!

bacterial February 23 2009, 01:13:43 UTC

talent? um. no. you run literary rings around me. xD

nonetheless, thank you very much!

damoyre February 21 2009, 13:20:02 UTC

This is lovely. :) It totally fits these two. Great job!

bacterial February 23 2009, 01:05:38 UTC

aww, well, thank you! :D

xenafox February 21 2009, 19:15:42 UTC

You made the incest sound so pretty! =D

bacterial February 23 2009, 01:04:48 UTC

lmao, thank you! xD

it's like throwing a pretty rug over an ugly couch.
actually, it is not like that in any way. ignore me. i fail.

ladyanneboleyn February 22 2009, 01:54:14 UTC

I love how you captured the dysfunction of their relationship, the superficiality and cliche and illicit thrill. So good!

bacterial February 23 2009, 01:02:31 UTC

ahaha, i'm glad you liked it!

and, oh, i love how quintessentially dysfunctional they'd have to be. it makes me happy. :D

lady_mouse04 February 22 2009, 19:12:47 UTC

This was wonderful, Roadcide.......

bacterial February 23 2009, 00:58:48 UTC

aw, thank you very much. (:

lady_mouse04 February 24 2009, 02:28:37 UTC

Anytime ^_^