California Girls...Again: Chapter Three: Sunny/Father

[mkrobinson]

Title/Prompt: California Girls...Again: Chapter Three: Sunny/Father

Author: mkrobinson

Rating: PG-13

Words: 2276

Table:http://babysitters100.livejournal.com/53582.html#cutid1

Summary: Sunny knows how to play this game, she knows it very well.

Warnings:

Notes: this is still a giftfic for bookplayer!

Comments

[bookplayer]

Thanks so much! Good chapter!

[mkrobinson]

You're welcome!

[automaticdoor]

Ugh, Kristy's daaaaad. :/

[mkrobinson]

Yeah, Patrick is going to be Patrick.

Re: mod note:

[mkrobinson]

Hey :)

Yeah, I thought they might be slightly too similar, but I wasn't sure. This was just a experiment for this chapter that I doubt I'll be doing again because it was just too hard to make that noticable a difference.

I did use a lot of the same dialogue, and I sort of only realized that after I posted. I was trying to do like how AMM and co showed the different scenes in the super specials from other peoples POVs, and have basically decided that it isn't my strong suit and that I'm not going to do it again. :) Thanks for confirming that that might be a good idea, it was good to hear it from an outside source.

I really will be more careful, I promise! I made a misjudgement with this chapter that I won't make again! Upon rereading both chapters I see what you mean.

Thanks, I think they have too, they're becoming a bit of a habit all of a sudden. You've been a great help! :)

Okay, don't worry, I will!

Maria

Re: mod note:

[mkrobinson]

You're welcome! It was a better idea in theory, I suspect. I am too, though! Yeah, it really is. But I think I'm getting a lot better since we've (and miss_slipslop) been working together. (I've rewritten the "Thanksgiving" chapter btw with those changes.)