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Competition

Jan 31, 2012 17:16

Title/Prompt - Chapter 1 (Stacey)/#27: Competition
Author - leithal
Word count - just over 1,000
Rating - PG (language)
Summary - Stacey is not excited about the reunion invite
Link to table - HERE!
Author's note - standard disclaimer: characters not mine. Well, wait a sec, actually Alex and the tangentially-mentioned Steve are mine, but you know what I ( Read more... )

character: claudia kishi, author: marycontraria, pairing: no pairing, table 1, - shs reunion saga [marycontraria], prompt: competition, character: stacey mcgill

Comments 8

mkrobinson January 31 2012, 22:22:25 UTC

Nice chapter!

bookplayer January 31 2012, 23:33:47 UTC

I love your dialogue. Love it. It's witty and fun without being unbelievable.

And I really like Alex. I want more of her. I know other people don't care for OC's, but I love the interaction between her and Stacey.

I know I've already said that I can't wait for more, but. . . more!

luxken27 February 1 2012, 01:58:54 UTC

It's easy for Kristy to say 'hey you guys, let's all get together and catch up,' because her shit is so together you could make bricks out of it and build a house with them.”

*snickersnort*

And Kristy Thomas-Black? Ooh la la, I am intrigued!

imamaryanne February 1 2012, 02:17:17 UTC

I second bookplayer...you do write good dialogue! This is great I can't wait to read more.

I just knew Pete Black would end up with one of the BSCers, I just never thought it'd be Kristy!

joykilldrama February 1 2012, 02:48:42 UTC

This is great. I love your dialogue, though I always did think that Pete would end up with Mary Anne rather than Kristy. Of course, that could be because I'm a die hard Kristy/Cary fan. Shush.