the wheel is spinning, but the hamster's dead

Jul 04, 2011 21:41

TITLE/PROMPT: the wheel is spinning, but the hamster's dead | goodbye | table #3
AUTHOR: of_dreamdust
WORD COUNT: ~1000
RATING: all
NOTES: Warning for pet death and the awful type of humor that only occurs when sleep deprived.
SUMMARY:
For the last time. No. You cannot perform an autopsy on Frodo.

the wheel is spinning, but the hamster's dead )

character: byron pike, character: adam pike, character: jordan pike, pairing: no pairing, author: meroure, character: mallory pike, prompt: goodbye, character: frodo, table 3, character: vanessa pike, character: dee pike

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mizzmarvel July 5 2011, 01:45:52 UTC
Aw, this was sweet.

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meroure July 6 2011, 23:08:55 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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meroure July 6 2011, 23:08:25 UTC
Thank-you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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lucida July 5 2011, 02:14:58 UTC
YAY, you posted. I can't think of enough words to express how much I love this. It is just amazing. Adam wanting to perform an autopsy? I've thought that was absolutely brilliant and so in-character ever since you first mentioned it. I also love the JAB-interaction in general, Adam's relationship with Vanessa, and that Vanessa wrote a eulogy. She would so do this. And this:
“Pow is totally worthy of a Viking burial,” Jordan said, then winced when Mallory tapped him upside the head. “Well he is.”

“My brothers: the pyromanic and Freddy Krueger.” Adam heard her mutter, as Vanessa started a new stanza.

... is also brilliant. ♥

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meroure July 6 2011, 23:49:56 UTC
The Pike house: a horror movie waiting to happen. lollll

I am glad you liked this, and I suppose I should thank you for daring me into writing it.

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imamaryanne July 5 2011, 03:03:14 UTC
This was great! I laughed out loud at Frodo's mojo.

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meroure July 6 2011, 23:10:01 UTC
Thank-you! It's amazing how little rhymes with Fodo. lolll

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isabelquinn July 5 2011, 13:08:08 UTC
This was amazing. It's such a great combination of hilarious and touching, awesome work!

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meroure July 6 2011, 23:12:54 UTC
aw, thank-you!

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