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bake

May 31, 2011 00:33

Title/Prompt - Cupcakes & Cocktails, Chapter Three, Kristy (#74 - bake)
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character: kristy thomas, prompt: bake, table 2, author: oneoneohohone, character: original character

Comments 6

joykilldrama May 31 2011, 18:31:15 UTC

I absolutely love this. Of course, I would think that Kristy would know better than to give dogs chocolate but whatever, that's my own little nitpick.

You've characterized every character so perfect in this story.

oneoneohohone May 31 2011, 18:34:16 UTC

chocolate's only bad for doggies in large quantities. giving them a little tasty treat now and then is harmless ;)

oneoneohohone May 31 2011, 18:37:25 UTC

oh and thank youuuuuu! (i'm such an ingrate lol)

miss_slipslop June 1 2011, 03:27:09 UTC

You know, everyone can see what's written on here, including the person who you're writing about.

Just a thought.

hepburnforever June 1 2011, 04:59:49 UTC

you're right. I shouldn't have brought it up. I"ve deleted my comments.

hepburnforever June 1 2011, 05:00:01 UTC

I was wondering when Kristy was going to con Evan into being her date. It should have been obvious from the start. Haha. The pretending to be engaged thing might be a little much but it makes for a GREAT Super Special style twist.

Can't wait to see what you have the other girls get into. :)