Mallory's Big Seduction

[oneoneohohone]

Title/Prompt - Mallory's Big Seduction / Seduce
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[automaticdoor]

Priceless. Oh, Mal.

[oneoneohohone]

thank you!

[hepburnforever]

LMAO. Oh, Mal. Poor, despearate, misguided Mal.

You think she tried to hit on the cop??

[oneoneohohone]

i think she might have been so gone they might have had to take her "away" lol

[lizwiz_]

Poor Mallory indeed! You capture her perfectly.

Love your work, I've always enjoyed your stories on FF.net.

[oneoneohohone]

thanks liz! you know i <3 you too, would have said so on ffn but SOMEONE doesn't accept pm's :P

[imamaryanne]

This made me squirm, in a really good way. I love the detail about the contacts, Dee and John still holding out on letting Mal get them.

[oneoneohohone]

thanks! i always assumed that the pikes were a bit cash strapped being they had SO many kids, so why in the hell would they be able to get mal contacts? but of course she continues to assume they treat her like a baby. i should have had her "gallop" down the stairs lmao :)

[hepburnforever]

I could see her "talking dirty" to "Johnny" in horse terms. She'd probably be like "I'll be your dirty pony." or something. And the name"Johnny" makes me think she's fantasizing about one of the Hobart boys.

[oneoneohohone]

omg i wonder if mal grew up to be a girl who likes whips... horse whips and saddles! *looks around* SOMEONE WRITE THAT FIC! lol...the idea makes me shudder a bit...

[amor_demi_alma]

Hahhaha oh God I can't stop laughing!!!!!

[oneoneohohone]

thank you so much! it's awesome to make people laugh! <3