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Table #5, Prompt #094 - Tension

Feb 14, 2011 09:55

Title: Explanations and Complications
Author: LuxKen27
Prompt: #094 - Tension
Universe: Pre-canon (The Summer Before)
Genre: Drama
Rating: T
Warning: None
Word Count: 1,611
Summary: Janine Kishi begins seeing Charlie Thomas in a whole new light the summer before sophomore year.
Table: here

Author’s Note: For those of you who may not be ( Read more... )

character: claudia kishi, character: frankie evans, prompt: tension, character: janine kishi, table 5, author: luxken27, character: charlie thomas

Comments 12

baseballchica03 February 14 2011, 16:22:45 UTC

Ah, I love love love this!

luxken27 February 14 2011, 18:39:17 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it =)

jessicarae729 February 14 2011, 17:39:24 UTC

Fabulous! I'd love to read the longer story when that's posted for general consumption, where are you posting it?

luxken27 February 14 2011, 18:41:09 UTC

Thanks! =) When the longer story is ready to go, I'll post a link to the mothership comm, since I had so many requests for it during my research phase. (You guys are awesome - I wish the muse hadn't stalled out halfway through the first draft, LOL!)

snarky_imp February 14 2011, 20:40:03 UTC

EEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I'd go on with the actual reaction but you get the idea. I know I owe you a special sort of comment, but I think I'll save that for a different fic. ;)

I love the thought of Janine just freezing Frankie out until she just had to know why, and basically from:
Claudia might've only been twelve, through

It had been hard for Janine to be around her sister, because it felt like Claudia had stolen Frankie from her, even though she knew - objectively - that wasn't so.

After all, he had never been hers to begin with.
killed me in the best way. Also the thought of how the rest of the world would see the Thomas kids is spot on.

You, my friend, are awesome.

luxken27 February 15 2011, 15:44:19 UTC

I'd go on with the actual reaction but you get the idea.

LOL. Incomprehensible squee is totally a valid and acceptable form of commenting, in my book :D

I love the thought of Janine just freezing Frankie out

YES. Considering the way she acted towards Claudia right after the birthday party, this sort of reaction just seems spot-on for her, I think. Plus I just adore characters who can say so much with only a look.

You, my friend, are awesome.

*blush* Thanks. I'm just glad I was able to brighten your day a little bit! Awesome deserves awesome, LOL.

jennigan February 14 2011, 21:50:45 UTC

Awww! I want to readt the whole fic - I love fluff. Never too much.

luxken27 February 15 2011, 15:35:41 UTC

:D Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'll definitely let you guys know when I post the longer story!

isabelquinn February 14 2011, 23:13:00 UTC

Aww, I like this!! I'd never really been able to get on board with Charlie/Janine, but this really helped me to understand the pairing :)

luxken27 February 15 2011, 15:37:50 UTC

Charlie/Janine is something I didn't see or understand until I got back into the fandom as an adult :P One of the other fandoms I actively write for is centered around this age range of teenagers (14-17), so I guess I was especially in tune to them or something, IDK.

Either way, I'm glad you enjoyed it! =) Sometimes we just need fluff, no matter what flavor it comes in.