Nervous

Jan 02, 2011 22:59

 Title/Prompt--Nervous 
Author: miss_slipslop 
Prompt: 016--Nervous 
Link to Table:  http://community.livejournal.com/babysitters100/11603.html#cutid1
Characters: Jeff Schafer, Byron Pike, Adam Pike, Jordan Pike (age nine), Dawn Schafer, Sharon Schafer, the Pike family and their (wonderful ( Read more... )

character: byron pike, character: adam pike, character: jordan pike, pairing: no pairing, character: dawn schafer, character: sharon schafer/spier, table 1, prompt: nervous, author: miss_slipslop, character: jeff schafer

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lucida January 3 2011, 06:47:55 UTC
I love it! All the little references to things they also did in the books--the songs, the crazy eating, etc.--make it so much fun to read! I also like how you gave us your version on something that we all know happened (Jeff becoming friends with the triplets), but didn't get to see. It's totally believable and in-character. And, hey, props to you for managing to write nine year olds. ♥ And this is a small thing, but I also love that Jeff was kinda... in awe that they are triplets. Identical triplets are incredibly rare, yet it didn't seem like a big deal in the books, although I suppose Stoneybrook could have just been used to it. :P

Anyway! Wonderful story and I can't wait to see what you come up with next. :)

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miss_slipslop January 3 2011, 20:31:28 UTC
Aww, thank you! Our conversation about gross-out songs actually inspired me to put that in there! :D

Yup. I have never known any triplets, identical or fraternal, so I think I would definitely be in awe. I think that when AMM wrote them, she was just on her "yay, big families" spree, and wasn't even thinking about how rare triplets actually are!

I'm working on more stuff today--I love holiday break.

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imamaryanne January 3 2011, 14:47:41 UTC
I love the triplets and Pike household madness. Great story!

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miss_slipslop January 3 2011, 20:31:58 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

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mizzmarvel January 4 2011, 00:37:02 UTC
Super-cute! Poor Jeff has no idea what he's gotten himself into.

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