Want/Deaf

[annethundr05]

Title/Prompt - Want/Deaf
Author - annethundr05 
Word count - 334
Rating - G
Summary - Jessi reminisces about dance and the Braddock kids
Link to table - table 4
Author's note - I don't own the BSC or it's concepts. Taking them out of their sandbox and playign with them in mine. Also first BSc fic in forever, so it's just a warm-up. I love commentary (bad or good

Comments

[annethundr05]

Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it. I was kind of worried as this is my foray into this fandom in a long time. I wasn't sure if I had gotten it right but I guess that's ok too. :-)

[mizzmarvel]

Aw, I like this future for Jessi!

[annethundr05]

Aww thank you so much. I just saw that prompt and Matt was the first person to flit through my head. And yet I couldn't seem to write a younger Jessi, so I was a bit concerned that my older Jessi might not go over well but yay. \o/

[luxken27]

This is absolutely darling! =) It's awesome to see someone really take an interest in Jessi. I can totally see her taking this path and enjoying herself, being able to share her dancing with others.

There are a couple of small grammatical mistakes here, but nothing big. If you'd ever like a beta for your work, feel free to contact me, I'd be happy to help!

[annethundr05]

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it. Honestly she is one of my favorites b/c there is so much that you can explore with her character that she's practically a blank slate. Even more than that though, she's the easiest for me to understand. I fell like I can actually get in her head. And thank you for the beta offer as well, I do well for other people but when it comes to my own writing I miss things. More than that though most of my fiction usually are insomnia production and therefore written off no sleep. So I will definitely keep you in mind. :-D

[luxken27]

she's the easiest for me to understand. I fell like I can actually get in her head.

That's really cool - I haven't met many other BSC fans who feel the same way! I suppose because she didn't have much development before the early canon, its hard to figure out what to do with her. I'm definitely looking forward to your stuff, especially if she's going to be someone you write often! =)

And thank you for the beta offer as well, I do well for other people but when it comes to my own writing I miss things. More than that though most of my fiction usually are insomnia production and therefore written off no sleep.

LOL, I understand - I think we all have the problem of reading our stuff so much we miss easy mistakes :P I know I have a hard time letting my stuff 'rest' long enough for me to look at it with fresh eyes. But if you ever want help, just let me know! =)

[annethundr05]

"That's really cool - I haven't met many other BSC fans who feel the same way! I suppose because she didn't have much development before the early canon, its hard to figure out what to do with her."

I'm definetly in the minority on that count. For a long time I thought the author just really didn't know what to do with her. And rather than try and explore or flesh her out she got pushed to the side somewhat. I think that's the case she really didn't have much characterization. Which is why I believe so many people don't like her or Mallory. Granted I'm not the biggest Dawn fan, and she had tons of fleshing out.

I'm definitely looking forward to your stuff, especially if she's going to be someone you write often! =)

She will be, and Maybe Mary Anne. That's a big compliment esp. since I'm a fan of yours as well.

[gloriafan]

This is darling! I love this future!Jessi you write. I'd love to see more for you!

[annethundr05]

Thank you so much for the kind review! I truly do too though. I feel like its the combination of two loves for her and a true possibility. I've got a few one-shots stored on my computer featuring her. So who knows :-)

[gloriafan]

I'd love to read them! (BTW - You should totally take luxken27's beta offer, she's amazing).