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blackie_da_minx January 12 2010, 23:45:08 UTC
Lovely. Short, to-the-point, and incredibly well-written... and the times you chose or didn't choose...while canon... were so right on (trust me... there's people that would choose other times in between if they could to dwell on... there were plenty of times you could have cut into)there wasn't a lot of AU here, cept' for the last, but hey...let's face it we all imagine that clear as crystal anyways ;)

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cmk418 January 13 2010, 00:12:57 UTC
I love this. You start it off with a bang and the payoff at the end is just perfect. Nicely done!

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aliceinwondrbra January 13 2010, 04:24:46 UTC
Oh, I loved this. the first almost kiss was so wonderfully described. I could feel the slaying rush. Wonderful. :)

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sweetfaithy January 13 2010, 07:54:20 UTC
This is exactly what things should have been between B & F.It gives me some idea for a new fic.
Love the banner as well. =)

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julianatheorize January 13 2010, 10:25:23 UTC
Awesome. Short and sweet. This is pretty much canon to me.

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