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[babydragoneye]

Just a little something that I tried to get out yesterday for 10/8, it’s only a day late. Oh well. Kinda sad I didn’t think about this earlier in the month when we were at 10/5/8, but oh well.

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Fandom: Saiyuki
Pairings: 10/8, obviously. A little 10K and 5/8. And mentions of possible 3/9.
Rating: NC-17, here there be smut

Comments

[geri]

wow that was brilliant never scene that one coming at all very well done indeed.

[babydragoneye]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

[amikko]

would REALLY,REALLY LOVE to read a foursome. *leers*

[babydragoneye]

...I was hoping it would inspire someone else. If it doesn't I may have to write it myself.

[kerumica]

LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!! You got my boys (58) together in the most unexpected way. This was an awesome story. Thank you so much for sharing :D

[babydragoneye]

Haha, I almost thought the end was going to be just...too much. Almost just kept it at pure smut, but I have to get my 58 in there ♥

[xcerpted]

Epic!line - "You clean?" xDDD Tenpou is even more awesome than his usual awesome self here, much <333. And yes, poor Konzen (and Sanzo).

A few nitpicks though:

I think by 'shuttered' (2 instances), I think you meant 'shuddered'. And when Gojyo said he and Kenren were going drinking, maye he should have said they were going to get drinks instead? 'Cuz they came back pretty quick.^^;;

[babydragoneye]

Hee. Clean. Hah. I had to say something about Konzen in there, cause we just left them to go off as a lose thread.

Thanks for the notes. I will go fix it when I have more time and not rushing to work! I kinda thought they were going to work and then something happened and they had to come back... but I probably should have put that in there somewhere. Hm. I could add it in when Kenren is commenting on the scene.

Thank you for the comment, I'm glad you liked it!

[_profiterole_]

God, this is EPIC! I lovelovelove it! ^___^

[babydragoneye]

Hee! I'm glad you enjoyed!