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itsanonyx February 13 2012, 17:39:39 UTC
*awwww* That's cute. <3 <3 <3

Am I able to BUMB again?! *blushes*

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babydracky February 13 2012, 17:59:17 UTC
^________^
I'm glad you like it!

And, sure, you can Bump again!
See, you were the very first one this time^^

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itsanonyx February 13 2012, 18:44:33 UTC
*LOL* I was lucky enough to be in time this time. ;D

Pairing: Caspian/Susan Pevensie (Narnia)
Prompt: It started out as a feeling

Is this okay? :o)

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Caspian/Susan (NARNIA) babydracky February 14 2012, 18:22:44 UTC
"Where is Susan?" whispered softly Caspian when he saw the Pevensies.
"She is still alive, Caspian" gently answered Lucy.
"Oh, I see" smiled Caspian "Your world still live".
Lucy nodded.
"So, I'll wait for her" he added, his dark eyes shining.
"Don't" sadly answered Peter "She won't come to us. Not now. Not ever. She doesn't believe in Narnia and Aslan anymore."

"Don't mind Peter's words" Edmund told Caspian later "He suffers much more than you think about losing Susan forever"
"I don't" whispered Caspian "But I'll believe that she'll come to us in the end. I can feel it in my heart. It's a feeling. I know she'll come to us."
Edmund gently pated his shoulder.

Caspian sat alone looking at all those worlds in front of his eyes. Seeing his beautiful Susan living fully her life inspite of the grief. She had three children and seven great-children. In the end, she felt asleep lying alone, a smile on her lips. He didn't need to be next to her to hear her heart whispered...Caspian.

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julchen11 February 13 2012, 19:29:46 UTC
Both are great, my dear.
Mon Chéri , mmmmm... my favourite chocolate, absolutely!

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babydracky February 15 2012, 09:38:25 UTC
Thank you hon♥
Really? I didn't know it was your favorite chocolate. So, you do approve Zeke's choice?! ;)

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prisca1960 February 14 2012, 07:45:52 UTC
Lol, oh that's so cute. Thank you for writing this for me. I love it. Every bit of it. That's so Zeke :)

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babydracky February 15 2012, 09:39:01 UTC
Thank you hon!
I'm glad you liked the little ficlet I wrote for you♥

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addie71 February 14 2012, 16:02:43 UTC
*giggles* Yep, that's our Zeke!

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babydracky February 14 2012, 18:02:16 UTC
*grins*
Glad you like it!
Our Zeke can be a really really naughty boy! ;)

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archaeologist_d February 15 2012, 01:54:32 UTC
I loved the Balinor/Hunith one. Very sweet.

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babydracky February 15 2012, 09:37:05 UTC
Thank you hon♥

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