MERLIN, Arthur/Merlin- PG-13, "The White Raven" for Phoenixacid

Aug 18, 2009 19:13

Title - The White Raven
Fandom - MERLIN
Pairing - Arthur/Merlin
Rating - PG-13
Prompt - For my Darling Phoenixacid
To thank her for the beautiful drawing she made for me^^
I prompted her with the word "Raven" (How surprising! xD) and I promised her I'll write a drabble for the drawing she made. So here it is^^
I'm so sorry it took me so long, hon ToT
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[fandom] - arthurian legend, [character] - arthur pendragon, [fandom] - merlin, [prompts], [fanfic] - oneshot, [character] - merlin, [character] - mordred pendragon, [pictures] - drawing, [pairing] - arthur/merlin

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archaeologist_d August 18 2009, 18:30:18 UTC
I liked the way Merlin was willing to keep Arthur from dying and that the prince was cursed but Merlin would always be there for him.

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babydracky August 18 2009, 19:38:32 UTC
Thank you so much for your nice comment, hon.
I'm happy you like that little ficlet!
And sure Merlin will try his best to save his Arthur! ;)

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phantomreviewer August 18 2009, 23:01:00 UTC
Ouch, the curse is never fully lifted.

Lovely ficlet. :-)

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babydracky August 19 2009, 07:43:35 UTC
Sadly not^^
But we all know that Arthur will be badly wounded by a dark raven, don't we?
But Merlin will always be next to his Arthur^^

Thank you hon♥

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phantomreviewer August 19 2009, 19:42:40 UTC
Unfortuanly yes.

:-)

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aliensouldream August 18 2009, 23:33:30 UTC
I never read in this fandom, but I loved the title and had to give it a go. I really enjoyed it and I liked the way you interspersed the passage of time with little flashes of scenes. It was beautifully written and I liked the language.

One deep purple wound marbled Arthur’s golden hip; a black spot spreading its wings on the sunny sky of his skin. It was a deathblow stroke dealt by a powerful beak, by a magical hand.

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babydracky August 19 2009, 07:47:01 UTC
Awwwwwwww!! Thank you so much, hon♥♥♥
I'm really touched and proud to know that you gave my ficlet a try because you liked the title and especially that you liked it!
♥Me Happy♥
I'm glad you liked the language because I tried my best to be "poetic" in spite of my poor English.
♥♥♥
Once again, thank you so much.

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phoenixacid August 19 2009, 02:44:01 UTC
OMG OMG OMG, THANK YOU SO MUCH!

I love how protective Merlin is, and how he's willing to do anything to keep Arthur safe. And the way you worked the raven into this fic was great! This is a really lovely interpretation of the bond they have for each other. My favourite part was probably the passage in the end; There's a hint of the darkness that Arthur will eventually face in the future, but with Merlin standing beside him, he will triumph over anything that comes his way.

Again, thank you! It means a lot to me that you would write a story to accompany my art. *hugs you tight*

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babydracky August 19 2009, 07:52:04 UTC
*grins stupidly*
Awwwwwwww hon!! I'm so happy you liked the ficlet.
I'm so sorry it took me so long to write and post it but I really wanted to write you somlething different, something a little more "poetic" like I like to write in French.
So I couldn't be happier if you say that you like it^^

I love ravens and I really wanted to talk about their myths and legends, how dark or white they could be^^ And I'm really glad it worked for you!♥

Protective!Merlin is definitely lovely even if Arthur doesn't like to feel protected, or worse, nursed xD

I'm just so happy you made a so beautiful drawing for me!♥
Anytime, hon♥♥♥
*holds you close*

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blackbirdj2 August 19 2009, 07:21:51 UTC

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babydracky August 19 2009, 07:42:18 UTC
Thank you♥

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