Chlollie Fanfic: Love For Realsies, Chapter 24

Oct 23, 2010 08:29


Some more Chlollie for ya!

And yes, I know you all want these two banging like bunnies again (I do, too!), but Ollie's heart needs reassurance and mending, so I'm taking care of that first.

If you're lucky though, and if y'all comment in a frenzy, I *might* have another chapter up pretty soon... ;-)

Enjoy!


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nienna87 October 23 2010, 08:33:41 UTC
Okay so I totally had to squee at the end of this chapter...and yes I did it out loud :D Ahhh! I love it. Finally she lets it all go...Gah Ollie was breaking my heart there for a minute. Just knowing how hurt he was...I just wanted to hug him. lol Loved the meaning that Chloe put into her actions...instead of just words she showed him that she was ready to remove it all. Love love love! Amazing chapter :D More soon yeah?

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babydee1 October 23 2010, 08:49:00 UTC
"More soon yeah?"

*grins* Yeah...I'm in the salon getting my hair done, but the next chapter is about 95% ready. It should in up within the next 24hours, depending on how busy I am.

So glad you like it, Nienna. I'll comment properly when I can access a keyboard that's bigger than my palm! :)

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jediyoda99 October 23 2010, 08:36:45 UTC
Wow. when she is baring it all, she is really baring it all. I know that Chloe is afraid that when she says those words, Oliver will disappear and left in there in despair. But she has got to see that the guy is absolutely bonkers for her.

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babydee1 October 23 2010, 09:00:22 UTC
Hi jediyoda! *waves*

I guess when Oliver said he wanted her to bare it all, she took it literally. ;)

But its nice to see Chloe going the extra mile, and working hard to keep her man.

Thanks for your awesome comments! :)

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eternal_moonie October 23 2010, 08:46:24 UTC
Absolutely LOVE this new chapter honey!! *hugs*

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babydee1 October 23 2010, 09:06:57 UTC
So glad you like it, honey! :)

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eternal_moonie October 23 2010, 09:09:02 UTC
thank your lucky stars for me not writing anything new at the moment!

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sweet_jesus1 October 23 2010, 10:35:21 UTC
Wow, this chapter was just wow I loved that she was so incredibly vunerable but still couldn't just say those 3 little words. But I think she finally managed to convince Ollie that she feels the same because of She smiled. “It would be totally and completely irrelevant,” she said confidently. “Why? Because there’s this tall, blonde archer that’s completely stolen my heart, and for the life of me, I can’t get him out of my head!”
Clark can't compare to Olivers fire and passion even with all their history, because if she were to say ILY to Oliver the impact would be huge, which sadly she's afraid to face just yet - loved it, much love

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babydee1 October 25 2010, 21:17:08 UTC
"Wow, this chapter was just wow I loved that she was so incredibly vunerable but still couldn't just say those 3 little words. But I think she finally managed to convince Ollie that she feels the same..."

It had better be enough to convince him, or I'm-a slap him upside the head! What more does he want the girl to do?!? :-D

"Clark can't compare to Olivers fire and passion even with all their history, because if she were to say ILY to Oliver the impact would be huge, which sadly she's afraid to face just yet - loved it, much love"

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! I really appreciate all the lovely comments! :-)

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cullenblaze October 23 2010, 10:55:59 UTC
aww that was amazing. chloe finally telling Oliver everything:-) next chapter pleeease:-)

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babydee1 October 25 2010, 21:17:39 UTC
Glad you like it, hun! Next chapter's ready... :-)

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