Comments | babydee1: Chlark Fanfic: On The Inside, Chapter 14

babydee1

Chlark Fanfic: On The Inside, Chapter 14

Jul 09, 2010 09:49

Y'all gotta lurve me. At long last...SMUUUUUUUUT!!! :-D

Chapter 14 of On The Inside, with my compliments. Never took me so darned long to get two people busy...

Chapter is rated NC-17, so no minors here. Thanks!

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smallville, chloe, fanfic, ontheinside, clark, chlark

Comments 17

psyco23 July 10 2010, 01:11:57 UTC

wow!!! amazing!

babydee1 July 10 2010, 04:53:46 UTC

Thanks, Will! :-)

jacques21 July 10 2010, 07:13:05 UTC

Oh wowza... That was... wow!
I can honestly say that that was worth the wait. All of that tension finally blew up and Chlark exploded.
Off to read the next chappie.

babydee1 July 10 2010, 12:23:54 UTC

"I can honestly say that that was worth the wait."

...and that's all that matters! :-D

Seriously, I was so worried that I'd turned people off this story by the lack of smut, but I'd have done it an injustice if they'd gotten together anytime sooner.

"All of that tension finally blew up and Chlark exploded."

Hee! What I like to call 'The Pressure Cooker Effect.' ;-)

So glad you like it, honey!

iluvaqt July 11 2010, 11:48:38 UTC

Wow, completely blew me away. I felt their urgency and intensity. It was a while coming but it didn't disappoint. Hot damn.

babydee1 July 11 2010, 12:49:56 UTC

...and my work here is done! :-D

So glad you liked it, and thanks for the awesome comments. You rock!

laurelnola September 29 2010, 13:59:52 UTC

"She grinned gleefully. “Let’s see…restored all my bank accounts, registered at Met Gen and the biggie - updated my subscription at VideoWorld.”

This is where hacking skills come in handy, because no one else on the planet would be able to restore, in under a week, the identity of a person who's been dead for over a year. ;-)

"She tilted her head and smiled, her brown eyes twinkling. “I have an appointment planning to see an optician later on in the week,” she said. “I’m…I’m going to change them to clear lenses.”

I love the way you're showing her emerging from her shell, a bit at a time, just like a butterfly.

"Chloe sighed, and he was tempted to lean down and press soft kisses on the smooth skin of her neck. Reluctantly, he let his hands fall away from her and stepped back."

Damn you, Clark! We were just about to get to the good stuff, you prude! *hmphs*

"She wanted him. Finally, she was ready to be with him."

Ha! Thank goodness Chloe isn't the monk you are. Squeeee! Chlark at last!!

*runs off to next chappie*