Chlark Fanfic: On the Inside, Chapter 1

[babydee1]

Are there any Chlarkers left in the Hizzie??? Make some NOIZE!!! :-)

Y'all didn't think I'd forgotten you now, didja?  Yes, Clark may be a douche on the show at the moment, but hey - I'm creating my own canon here.  So stuff TPTB.  Stuff 'em, I say!

Being internetless does have its advantages.  For the first time in my life, I have three WIPS on the

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[eternal_moonie]

*CUDDLES*

Totally AWESOME start! Ohhh and what a cliffhanger!!

[babydee1]

I am a meanie, aren't I? ;-)

Thanks for commenting, Jan!

[wwg23]

Yay! A Chlark fic from Dee!!!

I'm sooooo looking forward to reading this. :)

PS: You know my feelings about Chlollie. :p

[babydee1]

Hee! I do indeed. The less said on that, the better! ;-)

Glad you're liking this one so far!

thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you

[mari2anne]

Oh, did I say thank you? Just ditto it about a thousand times!!!

You know how to repair the wounded Chlark heart so well! I was soooooooooooooooooo happy to see this story. Your Chlollie stories are awesome, but my heart too will always belong to the Chlark ship, no matter what the SV writers come up with. They cannot make me believe the lies they try to sell (yes, I'm still watching which somehow makes me even a stronger Chlark shipper... something along the lines of 'I think they protest too much' or some other weird psycho trip they are on...)

I will review this lovely first chapter more later... Just wanted to get that 'thank you' to you a little faster than that delivery boy!

THANK YOU! ;-)

Re: thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you

[babydee1]

"Oh, did I say thank you? Just ditto it about a thousand times!!!"

LOL!!! Aw, bless you, Mari! :-D

"You know how to repair the wounded Chlark heart so well! I was soooooooooooooooooo happy to see this story. Your Chlollie stories are awesome, but my heart too will always belong to the Chlark ship, no matter what the SV writers come up with. They cannot make me believe the lies they try to sell (yes, I'm still watching which somehow makes me even a stronger Chlark shipper... something along the lines of 'I think they protest too much' or some other weird psycho trip they are on...)"

BINGO. That's exactly where I'm at. I'm under no illusions that they're going to sell Chlollie as OMG TRU LUV! In fact, they took great care to establish the fact that they're just having a bit of fun with each other. Of course I can do what I want in fanfic land, but for the show, Chlark is still (and always will be) my OTP. I must confess, I'm having such a blast with Chlollie, though! :-P

"I will review this lovely first chapter more later

[simi24]

She has moved to another city, changed her looks, and name. However Clark still manages to find her. This was a great start, Dee. I was on the edge of my seat and practically fell off when it ended on that semi-miniature evil cliffy. Don't worry I wasn't hurt (much).
Can't wait for the next part. And patiently awaits your other WIP's :)

[babydee1]

"She has moved to another city, changed her looks, and name. However Clark still manages to find her."

I know, doesn't it just make your Chlarky heart sing? *sighs*

"This was a great start, Dee. I was on the edge of my seat and practically fell off when it ended on that semi-miniature evil cliffy. Don't worry I wasn't hurt (much)."

Aw, your poor bum! I'd offer to rub it for you, but that would just be weird. And worrisome! :-/

Working on it. Working on all of them! :-)

[iluvaqt]

Perfect song choice for Chloe. I'm still a Chlarker deep down and I'd always read anything by you. You've sucked me into this new world of Chloe's, she's made a good life for herself and while it's obvious she's trying too hard to leave the old one behind, she would have made it stick if Clark hadn't shown up. I wonder what he'll do to convince her that Chloe Sullivan is worth living for. Awesome so far.

[babydee1]

"Perfect song choice for Chloe."

It is, it's so apt and describes her situation perfectly.

"I'm still a Chlarker deep down and I'd always read anything by you."

Aw, thanks, hun! *hugs you*

"You've sucked me into this new world of Chloe's, she's made a good life for herself and while it's obvious she's trying too hard to leave the old one behind, she would have made it stick if Clark hadn't shown up. I wonder what he'll do to convince her that Chloe Sullivan is worth living for."

Oh, Clark has one very tempting ace up his sleeve. You'll have to wait till the next chapter to see what that is! ;-)

"Awesome so far."

Thank you, glad you like it! :-)

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[babydee1]

PS: Awesome gif, by the way! :-)

[iluvaqt]

It's by cara410, she posted two variations on chlollie. I love it.