Comments | babydee1: Chlark/Kaloe Fanfic: Tempted, Chapter 2

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Chlark/Kaloe Fanfic: Tempted, Chapter 2

Jan 19, 2010 16:46

Title:               Tempted
Author:          BabyDee
Pairing:          Chlark
Rating:           NC-17
Warnings:      Kinky sexxors
Timeline:       Futurefic (sequel to Temptress & Temptation)
Disclaimer:    All characters belong to the CW & DC comics.
Summary:     Clark stages an intervention for his work-obsessed girlfriend.
Feedback:      Oh yeah, ( Read more... )

chloe, clark, redkclark, tempted, smallville, kaloe, fanfic, series:temptingseries, chlark, kal

Comments 24

eternal_moonie January 19 2010, 15:56:18 UTC

That is what happens when I keep refreshing my LJ Inbox. I stumble upon this magnificent beauty of an update!! What an AWESOME new chapter honey!!!

babydee1 January 29 2010, 10:01:05 UTC

Glad you like it, Jan! :-)

christina_kat January 19 2010, 16:09:35 UTC

Please Please Please update soon..really soon.
This story is really great.
How can a girl think about work when she is dating Clark?? How can someone fake an orgasm with him? Chloe is totally workaholic and I think Kal is the right guy to make her forget about work. Kal and bondage?? Thank you my dear, thank you :)

babydee1 January 30 2010, 12:36:46 UTC

"How can a girl think about work when she is dating Clark?? How can someone fake an orgasm with him?"

I'm afraid I have no answer for you there, CK. She's nuts, maybe??!?

"Kal and bondage?? Thank you my dear, thank you :)"

Anytime, my dear, anytime. And thank you for commenting! :-D

psyco23 January 19 2010, 16:36:22 UTC

how did i miss this one??

awesome intervention by clark, chloe really needs to take a break.

more soon?
ah, almost forgot, clark really is amastermind when it comes to these events:p

babydee1 January 30 2010, 12:40:28 UTC

"awesome intervention by clark, chloe really needs to take a break."

I agree, Will. When in crisis, break out the RedK! :-P

Glad you like it, I'll try to update soon. :-)

phoenixnz January 19 2010, 16:46:07 UTC

Ooh, Clark, Red K, and even a little bondage. This is gonna be soooo good.

babydee1 January 31 2010, 02:00:58 UTC

Oh, I certainly hope so! ;-)

Glad you like it. :-)

chloista4ever January 19 2010, 18:52:34 UTC

<“And most importantly,” he went on quietly, “when was the last time you actually came?” Her eyes widened and her heart hammered in her chest. “What exactly are you accusing me of?” she whispered. “Come on, Chloe, I’m not an idiot. I know you’ve been faking it with me for a while now.”>

Love this part, you know why? 'cause it shows what could happen to couples after years of been in a routine, is realistic and I like it a lot, I can't wait to the next chapter I'm sure is going to melt my screen

babydee1 January 31 2010, 02:07:25 UTC

Hey, Ana! *hugs*

"Love this part, you know why? 'cause it shows what could happen to couples after years of been in a routine, is realistic and I like it a lot,"

I agree. They've been together for five years by now (as a couple), so it's easy to believe that they might have fallen into a rut over time.

So glad you like it - and I hope you have computer screen insurance! :-D