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babydee1

Kaloe Fanfic: Temptation, Chapter 5

Dec 05, 2009 10:29

...and here's the last one.

Many thanks for reading, guys, and for all your lovely comments!

Enjoy.

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Comments 36

jlvsclrk December 5 2009, 10:01:53 UTC

“You could have just baked a pie, you know,” he said reproachfully. “…and dropped some of it on your boobs. That would definitely have gotten me to sit up and take notice of you.”

LOL! I'm glad Clark is starting to listen to his inner Kal some - I'm sure he has some mighty kinky ideas.

babydee1 December 5 2009, 10:38:10 UTC

"LOL! I'm glad Clark is starting to listen to his inner Kal some - I'm sure he has some mighty kinky ideas."

Oh, he certainly does. That's why there be a threequel in the works! :-P

So glad you liked it!

laurelnola December 5 2009, 15:00:35 UTC

"“So…” he began, stroking her damp hair off her forehead, “how was that for making it up to you ( ... )

babydee1 December 8 2009, 19:55:34 UTC

"I'm guessing all is forgiven. ;-)"

After that romp? Definitely!

"BWAH!!!!! *falls over laughing* That was genius, Dee!"

Well, it worked the last time...but you haven't read Temptress yet, have you? You'll have to give it a glance to see what Clark's going on about! ;-)

"This was so much fun, Dee. I love how you gave us hot, smokin' Kal, mixed with gentle, earnest Clark."

My favourite combination! :-P

"I love that this is a Clark who realizes when he's screwing up the best thing that's ever happened to him, and apologizes when he knows he's wrong, even if his mistakes sprang from good intentions."

Exactly. He keeps an open mind, and doesn't jump on his judgemental high horse with unfettered impunity. Pity TATB seem to have lost this chap. I don't know who they have with them now, but it's not my Clark.

"And I laughed at how embarrassed he was at talking about sex (I think Clark and I went to the same school, as I can totally relate). ;-)"Aw, if anyone could identify with SexShy!Clark, I knew it would be you ( ... )

laurelnola December 8 2009, 20:34:31 UTC

"Aw, if anyone could identify with SexShy!Clark, I knew it would be you! :-)"

Very true!

Btw, did you get my PM or is LJ still being wonky?

babydee1 December 9 2009, 11:15:13 UTC

LJ must still be on the fritz, 'cause I got nuthin'. :-(

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eternal_moonie December 5 2009, 15:35:52 UTC

WOOHOO!!!! Totally LOVED IT!!! Another total masterpiece of Chlark!

babydee1 December 8 2009, 19:57:05 UTC

Aw, I'm so glad you think so! Thanks for reading & commenting so faithfully, Jan! :)

christina_kat December 5 2009, 19:45:00 UTC

Loved it!
The pie comment...LOL WIN!

I really can't wait for more. Clark in action, trying to unleash Kal without RedK is HOT to read.

babydee1 December 8 2009, 19:59:37 UTC

Clark + Chloe + Pie = Hawt Sexxorz. Nuff said.

Glad you liked it, CK! ;-)

simi24 December 5 2009, 21:16:00 UTC

Another masterpiece!!
*crowd screams, ENCORE, ENCORE!!!*
Glad that Clark will start listening to his inner Kal.
Man, I could really go for a slice of pie now ;)

babydee1 December 9 2009, 19:00:05 UTC

Another masterpiece!!

Yay! Thank you! *takes bow*

"*crowd screams, ENCORE, ENCORE!!!*"

You'll get one, you'll get one! As soon as I've gotten some Chlollie outta my system. ;-)

"Glad that Clark will start listening to his inner Kal."

Oh, me too. It's about time that boy shed some of his hang-ups!

"Man, I could really go for a slice of pie now ;)"

...and everyone around you will wonder why you're eating it with a massive grin on your face! :-D

So glad you liked it, Rhonda. Thanks for commenting!