Chlark/Kaloe Fanfic: Temptress, Chapter 19

Nov 18, 2009 09:59

New update in the house! I meant to get this out yesterday, but RL has kept me busy.

The good news is that it's nice and long, and I should be able to tie everything up in one more chapter. Yay me!

Enjoy!


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eternal_moonie November 18 2009, 10:56:09 UTC
Totally awesome new chapter honey!
You're doing great!!

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babydee1 November 18 2009, 11:56:51 UTC
Thanks, Jan babes!!! :-)

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christina_kat November 18 2009, 12:31:47 UTC
Wow! Your fics always make me saying wow over and over again.
I know Kal is hot but when you see Clark horny but shy, trying to find his control...well, that's sexy for me. I loved that chapter and the part where Clark pushed his finger inside Chloe's mouth made my eyes burn...
Hope there's more soon!

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babydee1 November 21 2009, 10:11:20 UTC
Thanks, CK! Much as I love me some Kal, I think Clark needs to take the reins from now on - with a little help from his latent side. ;-)

Glad you thought the finger-lickin' was hot. I think you'll really like what they'll be getting up to in the next chapter! :-D

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kitmerlot1213 November 18 2009, 13:13:37 UTC
This was just lovely! The Chlark bantering is adorable and I like how comfortable they are with each other.

And it looks like more smut's on its way--YEAH!!

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babydee1 November 21 2009, 10:49:37 UTC
"This was just lovely! The Chlark bantering is adorable and I like how comfortable they are with each other."

Glad you like, babes. Chlark are easy to write because the connection is already there and doesn't need to be fabricated.

"And it looks like more smut's on its way--YEAH!!"

Oh, definitely. Everyone get your First Class Tickets for the fast train to Smut City!!! ;-)

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phantom_queen November 18 2009, 14:15:03 UTC
As much as i enjoyed the Kaloe stuff, I'm really glass its ending on a chlark note. Can't wait for the next chapter

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babydee1 November 21 2009, 11:25:02 UTC
Kaloe certainly was fun, but he was always just meant to be a catalyst. It's Clark's turn now. And I think he'll get through it all just fine! ;-)

Glad you like it!

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chloista4ever November 18 2009, 19:08:50 UTC
Nice!

"Chloe’s knees buckled as carnal pleasure began to run riot in her body. Clark steadied her with a hand on her hip and pulled her up against him, and she trembled as his erection pressed hotly against her belly. Her arms went around his neck and she moaned as he kissed her deeply, his tongue stroking and tangling with hers long after all traces of apple pie were gone."

I love the way you decribed them in here, it was seriously sexy :-) ppms!

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babydee1 November 21 2009, 12:07:35 UTC
"I love the way you decribed them in here, it was seriously sexy :-)"

I know! Clark's finally learning to let his inner bad boy out. And I'm sure Chloe's going to be very pleased with the results!!! ;-)
Glad you like it!

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