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babydee1

Chlark/Kaloe Fanfic: Temptress, Chapter 15

Nov 06, 2009 14:13

Right, where did I leave y'all? Oh, yes - up a particularly nasty cliff, that's where! :-P

At last, here's the next chapter of Temptress. Nice and long. Told you I wouldn't leave you up there forever!

Enjoy.

Title:               Temptress

Author:          BabyDee
Pairing:          Chlark/Kaloe

Rating:           NC-17

Timeline:       Season 4 (after ( Read more... )

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Comments 25

summerstar882 November 6 2009, 15:13:20 UTC

You trade in one cliffhanger for another.

Tsk...tsk. Loved it, but your evil ;)

babydee1 November 6 2009, 16:15:02 UTC

"You trade in one cliffhanger for another."

Gotta luv me! ;-)

"Tsk...tsk. Loved it, but your evil ;)"

Hey, I got a rep to protect here! *said with New York accent*

Glad you like it, Jenny! :-D

psyco23 November 6 2009, 15:13:34 UTC

i KNEW you'd stop it there, i just KNEW!!!!

please tell me that we wont have to wait as long as we had to read this one... the suspense can kill u know???

and turns out i was right, he did stood up for himself :-) do i get points for that???

Very good update, btw

babydee1 November 6 2009, 16:21:00 UTC

"i KNEW you'd stop it there, i just KNEW!!!!"

Yup. You know me well, m'dear! ;-)

"please tell me that we wont have to wait as long as we had to read this one..."

Well, there's good news & bad news on that front. The good news is the next chapter is all written, and the one after that. Yay! The bad news, however, is that I don't get much computer time on weekends, so if I can't squeeze in an hour or two to edit over the next couple of days, you might have to wait till Monday. But I'll do my best! :-)

"and turns out i was right, he did stood up for himself :-) do i get points for that???"

You get a Gold Star, William, and a handshake for not panicking!

"Very good update, btw"

*blushes* Thank you! I was worried it might come across as choppy, so you've calmed me down some. :-)

Glad you liked it!

kitmerlot1213 November 6 2009, 15:46:01 UTC

Good for Clark for not only trusting Chloe with his secret, but for taking care of her when she was so upset. Good man :):)

babydee1 November 6 2009, 17:13:25 UTC

I like this Clark. He's da MAN! ;-)

Glad you liked it, Kathy!

jlvsclrk November 6 2009, 15:57:45 UTC

Oh my, that was kind of scary - Chloe was SOOOO out of control that I was afraid for her. But Clark will never find a more receptive audience for his story, that's for sure.

babydee1 November 6 2009, 17:32:10 UTC

Poor Chloe - she was really at the end of her tether here, she'd had enough.

And I agree - Chloe's in for the talk of her life!

Glad you liked it, hun. :-)

carcassi November 6 2009, 16:30:43 UTC

Dee, you *really* are getting too good at this cliffie thing. A whole week dangling, and here we are, back again, hanging on for dear life. *Rubs aching arms*

*Sunny grin* 'Sallright, though. I forgive you. Because you always make it worth the wait, as this chapter proves. Bickering Clois, a dash of Chlollie, and most of all, VERY intense Chlark--it pretty much had something for everyone. :)

I adore your feisty Lois, but I've got to admit, it was a lot of fun to see Kal give her a taste of her own medicine.

“Are you threatening me, Smallville?” she asked incredulously. “Exactly who do you think you are?”

“I’m the person who’s going to kick your ass from here to kingdom come if you stick your nose in my business again,” he warned. “You got that?”*Wild applause* Way to go, Kal! IMO, Season 4!Lois was *begging* for this kind of comeuppance. I love it that he took away her car keys, too!! That's exactly the kind of bold action that Lois might (finally) respect. Dare we hope? *G ( ... )

babydee1 November 6 2009, 19:57:02 UTC

"Dee, you *really* are getting too good at this cliffie thing. A whole week dangling, and here we are, back again, hanging on for dear life. *Rubs aching arms*"

I can't help it, Debbie - I'm addicted to Evil Cliffies!!! :-D

"*Sunny grin* 'Sallright, though. I forgive you. Because you always make it worth the wait, as this chapter proves. Bickering Clois, a dash of Chlollie, and most of all, VERY intense Chlark--it pretty much had something for everyone. :)"

Oh, ta! I was trying for a balance, and I think I achieved it!

"I adore your feisty Lois, but I've got to admit, it was a lot of fun to see Kal give her a taste of her own medicine.

*Wild applause* Way to go, Kal! IMO, Season 4!Lois was *begging* for this kind of comeuppance. I love it that he took away her car keys, too!! That's exactly the kind of bold action that Lois might (finally) respect. Dare we hope? *G*"

Lois means well, bless her, but Kal wasn't in the mood to be bullied. At least she knows not to mess with Smallville anymore!

"The Chlark scene absolutely ( ... )