Chlollie Fanfic: Beauty in the Breakdown XI: Baby Love, Chapter 3

Sep 29, 2014 01:18

Hi y'all,

...Back again with more Chlollie goodness! :-)

ETA 05.10.14: I noticed a few timeline issues in this chapter, and I've amended it slightly so that it makes better sense.

Enjoy.  Awesome banner by Chleansmile; thanks, Sunny!


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chlollie, chloe, series, smallville, rated:pg13, babylove, oliver, fanfic, beautyinthebreakdown

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madlenita September 29 2014, 15:33:58 UTC
Thank you for awesome chapter, Oliver with little Charlie it was so sweet....

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hellzz_on_earth September 29 2014, 16:10:41 UTC
Ollie is ready to be a father. I know Chloe is going to keep him steady, but I still think Little Queen is going to get whatever she wants, within reason of course. lol
Thanks for the update.
Happy writing.

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noellesullivan September 29 2014, 17:50:08 UTC
“It’s just labour, honey,” she said patiently.  “I admit, it hurts; but in terms of the actual progression of delivery, nothing’s happening at the moment.”  OMG!!! LOL!!! I can't believe she's so calm. I'd be sooo scared and crazy.

Ollie's ready to be a daddy... He and Charlie- sooo cute.

Baby Queen we're waiting for you, you mini Chloe!!!!

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chlollifan84 September 29 2014, 21:49:59 UTC
"“Oh, God, to think I was dreaming about cheese when all the while, you were sitting here in pain…!” "
Oh god, you just killed me with this!! I couldn't stop laughing for at least two minutes!!

This chapter is probably my fave. I love the contrast between how panicked Oliver is and how calm Chloe is. It's funny and adorable.

And the flashback with baby Charlie was so cute. I definitely have a soft spot for Oliver Queen and babies.

I can't wait to read more! Thank you for this update!!

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watcharrow September 30 2014, 02:02:25 UTC
This chap is soooo sweeeetttt !!! <3 <3

He returned her smile, his heart swelling with love at his wife’s generosity.  Here she was, in constant pain, and her only thoughts were of him.  It was humbling, to be so blessed with unconditional love. my fav quotes, so much tenderness in this <3 <3 as well as the last one :
At the end of the night, Oliver smiled as he handed the sleeping baby over to his father and took his leave.
He was ready.

Thanks U so much for sharing :D cant wait for the update :)

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babydee1 October 2 2014, 23:39:40 UTC
Glad you liked it, my sweet! Hoping I can update again soon. :-)

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