Chlollie Fanfic: Beauty in the Breakdown X - Snow Angel, Chapter 6

Oct 19, 2013 19:14

Hi Peeps,

...some more Snow Angel.  I've had this ready to post for over a day, but LJ was being mean to me and not letting me post. :-(

Enjoy!  Brilliant banner by Ellashy.


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snowangel, chlollie, chloe, series, smallville, rated:pg13, oliver, fanfic, beautyinthebreakdown

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karlakarol October 19 2013, 20:04:12 UTC
So delicate and touching this fic, you have written with such sensitivity and doing a beautiful job. So sad for them. I look forward for the next installment. Hugs.

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babydee1 October 20 2013, 08:40:07 UTC
Thanks for your kind words, Karla! It's a tough one to comment on, but they'll get through this together and be stronger on the other side. :-)

Many thanks for commenting!

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phoenixnz October 19 2013, 20:16:21 UTC
My heart is broken for them. Of course Ollie will blame himself, trying to think of ways it could have been prevented, but the doctor was right. Sometimes there is no rhyme or reason for it. It just happens. Hopefully they'll both come to understand that in time.

I agree with karla above. You're writing this with complete sensitivity.

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babydee1 October 20 2013, 13:11:35 UTC
"My heart is broken for them. Of course Ollie will blame himself, trying to think of ways it could have been prevented, but the doctor was right. Sometimes there is no rhyme or reason for it. It just happens. Hopefully they'll both come to understand that in time."

I'm hopeful that they will. Once the initial torrent of emotions has settled, they'll look towards the future with hope and positivity.

"I agree with karla above. You're writing this with complete sensitivity."

*blushes* Thanks, my sweet. I really appreciate the time you take to comment, considering your very busy schedule. :-)

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mark_online October 19 2013, 22:02:28 UTC
Definetely heartbreaking.
And of course they'd blame themselves, not each other because that's just who they are!
Poor Chloe and poor Oliver, I can only imagine the kind of pain they are going through but I'm confident they will get out of it stronger and closer than ever.
Thanks for the great read Dee, until next time! :)

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babydee1 October 20 2013, 13:20:37 UTC
"Definetely heartbreaking.
And of course they'd blame themselves, not each other because that's just who they are!"

Indeed. Even in their grief, each one is trying to spare the other any pain. That's true love right there. :-)

"Poor Chloe and poor Oliver, I can only imagine the kind of pain they are going through but I'm confident they will get out of it stronger and closer than ever."

They will. I'm sure of it.

"Thanks for the great read Dee, until next time! :)"

You're always welcome, Mark. I hope to update again soon!

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watcharrow October 19 2013, 23:33:40 UTC
oh Dee no more SAD CHLOLLIE pleaaaaaase i just cant stand them like this (*big tears*) i WANT a Fun Chlollie, my fav' blonds in LOVE, a HAPPY CHLOLLIE sooonnn.... thanks so much to keep on writting on my adorable couple *hugs*

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babydee1 October 20 2013, 07:22:31 UTC
"oh Dee no more SAD CHLOLLIE pleaaaaaase i just cant stand them like this (*big tears*)"

I'm so sorry, my sweet. It hurts now, I know, but I'm going to fix this. *cuddles*

"i WANT a Fun Chlollie, my fav' blonds in LOVE, a HAPPY CHLOLLIE sooonnn...."

They're still my favourites,and they're still very much in love, babes. This is just a little setback, and I've already started penning the Happy!Chlollie story to follow. ;-)

"thanks so much to keep on writing on my adorable couple *hugs*"

Always a pleasure, my sweet! :-D

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ica013 October 20 2013, 04:21:02 UTC
Hugs

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babydee1 October 20 2013, 07:16:22 UTC
Thanks, my love. I know this is a tough one to read, but they'll be smiling again soon. xoxo

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