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Chlollie Fanfic: Beauty in the Breakdown X - Snow Angel, Chapter 4

Sep 22, 2013 10:25

Hola,

...Some more Snow Angel, peeps! It's a bit short, but the chapter after this is pretty much ready and will be posted next week.

Enjoy. Awesome banner by ellashy.

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snowangel, chlollie, chloe, series, smallville, rated:pg13, oliver, fanfic, beautyinthebreakdown

Comments 19

phoenixnz September 22 2013, 09:59:18 UTC

Aww, Ollie's so excited about being a father. I love that he's so determined the baby's going to be a girl. Of course, I'm worried now because of your summary and I am thinking it's too soon to get so excited.

BTW - have you checked out my new Chlollie? I've only done three chappies so far.

babydee1 September 22 2013, 10:28:42 UTC

"Aww, Ollie's so excited about being a father. I love that he's so determined the baby's going to be a girl. Of course, I'm worried now because of your summary and I am thinking it's too soon to get so excited."

I'm really building a happy picture that seems to be at odds with the warnings, aren't I? *sigh* :-\

"BTW - have you checked out my new Chlollie? I've only done three chappies so far."

You have a new Chlollie? Woman, you write like Bart Allen runs - I just can't keep up! :-O

I'll be along shortly to have a wee look. Thanks for the heads-up! Hopefully this is one I can keep up with, since it's still in its infancy. :-D

eternal_moonie September 22 2013, 11:29:16 UTC

AWESOME new chapter sweetums!!

babydee1 September 24 2013, 13:28:27 UTC

Thanks, babes! :-D

madlenita September 22 2013, 12:15:32 UTC

"“I practically called the man a paedophile.”"
I loved this, if i remember Lois name him craddlerobber or something like that ;-) I will reread this part now...
About this chapter, thanks for this, i love how Lois reacted, and how Ollie is making a plan ;-).

madlenita September 22 2013, 16:05:00 UTC

It was " cradle-robber". . .

babydee1 September 24 2013, 13:30:35 UTC

It was indeed,and Oliver wasn't very happy about it! :-D

Many thanks for all the lovely comments so far, Maddie - glad you like!

scout09 September 22 2013, 13:54:14 UTC

I've been reading each new chapter with trepidation waiting for the angst to drop, but I guess we're safe for now. Sweet chapter - love how Lois nearly announced it to her newsroom. Chloe should have known better and told her in an enclosed and vacant space. Love how excited Ollie is. So cute - thanks!

babydee1 September 24 2013, 13:34:21 UTC

"I've been reading each new chapter with trepidation waiting for the angst to drop, but I guess we're safe for now."

For now, yes. I think I've been dragging out each chapter as much as I can in an attempt to prolong the inevitable, but I can't stall for much longer, I'm afraid. :-/

Sweet chapter - love how Lois nearly announced it to her newsroom. Chloe should have known better and told her in an enclosed and vacant space."

True, ha-ha! :-D

"Love how excited Ollie is. So cute - thanks!"

A pleasure as always, and many thanks for commenting! :-)

chlollifan84 September 22 2013, 15:01:03 UTC

Sweet chapter!
It's great to see how much Chloe and Lois care about each other and how Lois is excited to become an aunt.
I can't wait to read the next chapter.

babydee1 September 24 2013, 13:36:00 UTC

It should be up later this week. Many thanks for your comments, glad you like! :-)