Chlark Fanfic: Wounded Heart, Chapter 19

[babydee1]

In spite of my current Smallville-induced depression, I managed to come up with another chapter.  I’m not too pleased with it, but if I tweak it anymore I think I might make it worse.

So here it is.  Please pardon my less-than-stellar mood…I’m still in a bit of a funk. L

*hugs*

The banner's gorgeous, though.  Thanks, ctbn60! :-)

Comments

[shiverslala]

awww! you made clark intelligent and attentive to chloe's needs, that's clearly science-fiction, i love it lol

lana's gift is very lanaesque brrr!

poor chloe being scared, I love how natural this is, like any woman would wake up a perfect all knowing mother pff lol

*sighs* this story is lovely

[babydee1]

Aw, thanks honey! I've been grumpy all week, so I was pretty down in the dumps when I wrote this chapter. I wasn't sure it would turn out okay, but your comment has brightened my day considerably!

"lana's gift is very lanaesque brrr!"

I had to throw in some Pink. Lana is so Lana, even when she’s in Offscreenville she has to be remembered!!!

[laurelnola]

An update! YES! *dances

[babydee1]

"This was brilliant, Dee! You have me smiling from ear to ear! :-)"

The feeling is mutual, hun - I've got my happy face on again!

"You know, it's such a shame that I used to like Lois, back in the early days when her best quality was her fierce loyalty to Chloe and her constant yells that Clark was nowhere near good enough for her cousin. Sigh, I miss that Lois."

*sigh* Don't we all? TPTB did a nasty job with how she was written. Good thing we can correct all their mistakes in fanfic! :)

I just had to go with Lana's pink nursery! I just had a brilliant idea for next chapter which I think will put smiles on a lot of faces!

Glad you liked it!

[chloista4ever]

Brilliant chapter Dee! i missed your updates :-) again you kick my ass,in our race in the updating department ;-)

[babydee1]

Hey babes! Glad you liked it - I wasn't too sure it flowed properly, but I couldn't be bothered to give it a re-write. I'm still upset about Clark's behaviour in 'Hex'!

[chaliebrown363]

I'm so glad you updated! And what a nice update it is! I was worried it'd be a while before we got one b/c of a certain show that will remain nameless... but yay for us!

[babydee1]

Thanks! I wrote most of this in a miserable daze, so I'm pleased it's considered readable. I half-expected to see some "WTF?!?" comments, but so far, it's all good! :)

Glad you liked it!

[cifan70]

Yay, loved the chapter. I loved that Chloe is ok with Jois. I am definitely ok with Chlark. hehe Looking forward to more.

[babydee1]

Yay Jois! Yay, Chlark! Yay, everything!

Except for Lana's Pink Nursery. Boo.

Glad you like it! :)