Chlark Fanfic: Wounded Heart, Chapter 17

[babydee1]

This chapter kicked my ass, I tell ya.  But it’s finally here.  And it was so gloriously long that LJ didn't let me post it.  So I've split it, and will see if I can add a bit on to the rest of it to make another complete chapter.

My work never ends.

Enjoy!  Banner by the lovely ctbn60. :-)

Comments

[sue_denim]

Yay! The made love, and sounds like once this is all sorted, they'll make love again. I wish show would get real with those two too. Also, happily glad about Jois.

Can Chloe claim crazy hormones as part of the reason why she didn't tell Clark too? Not that she didn't have more solid reasons, but fear of rejection I think would be heightened.

[babydee1]

"Also, happily glad about Jois."

You think it worked? I'm so glad. I considered getting her back together with Ollie, but then thought a li'l bit of Jois might be more fun. Took a bit of fanwanking, but at least its credible!

"Can Chloe claim crazy hormones as part of the reason why she didn't tell Clark too?"

I guess so. I'll throw in a line or two on that next chapter. Thanks!

[margroks]

ALways with the evil cliffies! Now I can't wait to hear what happened with Lana. Thank goodness you are fixing the horrific Clana. Thank you and bless you! As for Jois? Jois or Chlollie...could go either way but there was some hint of Jois on the show and Ollie is probably involved with the Black Canary so Jois is ok. Nois is even dumber than JO so they could fit together.

[babydee1]

"Always with the evil cliffies!"

I didn't mean it this time - you can blame LJ, they wouldn't let me post the entire thing - said it was too long :( Now you'll have to wait for me to lengthen the next chapter!

"Nois is even dumber than JO so they could fit together."

Hoot! Two peas in a pod, they are. They're welcome to each other!

[shiverslala]

...that bitch!

...oops sorry, my love of lana has transpired rather heavily here lol

what a relief, an explanation at last! he's right, they really don't communicate, just like in the show, and lois/jimmy in rehab lmao so true lol

[babydee1]

"...oops sorry, my love of lana has transpired rather heavily here lol"

Hee! Don't worry, LaLa - that 'bitch' is gonna get hers, you mark my words! ;-)

And much as I hate Nois & Jimmy separately, together they smoke somethin' wikid. So off to rehab for them!!! Lets hope it's made them slightly more bearable!

[laurelnola]

Is it wrong that this made laugh out loud?

"She gasped. “Don’t say that filthy word in front of my baby!” she said, scandalised, covering Kallie’s ears."

Hee! Chloe's maternal instincts are cutting in already!

It's about time they had this conversation! And yay for Jimmy and Lois! Perfect explanation for why Lois got drunk at the engagement party! Great update, Dee!

[babydee1]

Hee! I always get super-offended when people swear in front of my kids - especially the toddler who's picking up new words on a daily basis. As soon as I had Clark swear in frustration I know I had to write that in!

And don't you just love Jois together? Separately they annoy me no end, but together they're such a crack-up!

So glad you're still likin' it!

[christina_kat]

Really great chapter!I don't like Lois and Jimmy together though..I don't think I can picture them!LOL

Finally...they explained everything!I'm happy for them!Yay
thanks

[babydee1]

"I don't like Lois and Jimmy together though..I don't think I can picture them!"

You don't? Aw, but I think they'd be sweet! You should read twistedlyn's crack!fic here http://twistedlyn.livejournal.com/70677.html - it has some really funny Jois moments in it!

There's more 'splainin' coming up from Clark here. We have to know what the deal with Lana is! :)