Chlark Fanfic: Wounded Heart, Chapter 15

[babydee1]

Don’t ever say I don’t listen to you.

laurelnola asked for some happy, and pretty much everyone has been on my neck for a worthy Chlark reunion.  I’m happy to say this instalment contains both.  And the bonus?  No evil cliffie!

Oh, and marikology - you ordered a side of Tearful!Clark?  Get ready to squee like a fangirl, honey.

Enjoy!  Gorgeous banner by ctbn60, and I

Comments

[christina_kat]

SQUEEEE
Loved it!
*cries*

[babydee1]

Yay, lots of Squees!!!! I'm so glad you liked it!

SQUEEEE!

[marikology]

OMG. ::melts into a puddle of goo.:: CHLARK, YOU PWN MY SOUL.

Im sitting at my desk at work with the hugest stupidest ship-induced smile on my face! It was so worth the wait! but, I'm not gonna lie, I'm terribly jealous of shop_gal08!! Cute little Chlark baby girl! ::dies and is ded::

Re: SQUEEEE!

[babydee1]

I know! When shopgal hears about this, she's gonna have the biggest ship-eating grin EVAH!

So, you liked it, huh? :) I'm glad. Took me the whole freaking day, but I made it! And I gave you Clark!Tears, as well - lots of 'em!

Re: SQUEEEE!

[marikology]

i know!!! HEEEEE! I thought it was touching, and fitting because of the extreme shocking onslaught of emotions that he'd feel in such a situation. I think you captured that well.

I think Clark won't be mad at Chloe because he's already figured out that she left the party cos she thought he was hooking up with Lois. He's a BDA but he knows Chloe well enough to realize that would cause her to try to take herself out of the equation for their happiness.

Took me the whole freaking day, but I made it!
Well you created your own monster! We've learned if we whine and cry enough we'll get the next chapter out of you!

Re: SQUEEEE!

[babydee1]

"Well you created your own monster! We've learned if we whine and cry enough we'll get the next chapter out of you!"

Dear heaven, its true! My husband says that all the time when the toddler acts up and the baby cried to be picked up!

It's official: I'm a pushover! :(

[shiverslala]

I'm joining the SQUEE brigade here lol

is it wrong to love crying Clark? lol

[babydee1]

"is it wrong to love crying Clark?"

Nah! ;-)

And thank you (points to your icon!)

[wwg23]

This update was amazing. You captured all the emotion of becoming parents.

This is my favorite part:

“You called her Kal-El?” he whispered.

Very nice. :)

[babydee1]

Thanks, hun! Believe it or not, the baby was supposed to be a boy, but I couldn't find a suitable name for him. I did have to write in the Kalvin=Bald bit, because it was too hilarious not to!

[marikology]

I wanted it to be a girl! :-D The thought of Clark running after and totally spoiling a dark-haired little girl as stubborn as Chloe makes my Chlarky head explode. He's so endearingly awkward around women anyway, I'd imagine he'd find raising a girl to be an adventure.

[babydee1]

That made me think of a sixteen year old Kallie Kent going on her first date, and Clark all but ready to pound the poor weakling picking her up!

[chaliebrown363]

I think I squeed so much from this that I am literally stupid now! I have no words! Crying!Clark is just too cute for words in this, almost enough to make me forgive his BDAery(lol), almost... And now I love YOU to a degree that is truly stupid ;-)

[babydee1]

"And now I love YOU to a degree that is truly stupid ;-)"

Aw, I'm so flattered! It took me ages to rewrite everything, but I think it turned out better this way. Thanks for all your lovely comments!