Chlollie Fanfic: Beauty in the Breakdown VIII, Living Life - Chapter 4

Mar 29, 2012 00:03

Some more Chlollie in the House! :-)

Managed to get this tidied up in record time.  Hope you all like it!  *points to icon and whistles innocently*

(~Psst!  It's got vows!) ;-)


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chlollie, chloe, livinglife, rated:nc17, smallville, rated:pg13, oliver, fanfic, beautyinthebreakdown

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chlollielover March 29 2012, 00:13:47 UTC
*my emotions*

I can't control my emotions! I don't know if I cry from those beautiful vows, if I laugh of the "trying to cook" thing or if I do both things at the last scene.

This was so perfect Dee, I can't even tell you how much I loved it!

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babydee1 March 29 2012, 00:29:34 UTC
*cuddles you*

I think you just did, babes. Thank you so much, your reaction is exactly what I was hoping for! :-)

I was desperate to get the vows right, since we missed pretty much the entirety of the Chlollie wedding onscreen (and got two recitals of the vows of the Clois wedding that was not!)

Glad you like, and thanks so much for commenting! *hugs again* :-)

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ext_696325 March 29 2012, 00:51:39 UTC
I loved Chloe's vows beautiful

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babydee1 March 29 2012, 01:01:47 UTC
Thanks, Becki! Sorry you had to wait so long for them, but I wanted to get it right! :-)

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chlollie_4ever March 29 2012, 00:56:29 UTC
OMG, sooooooooooooo beautiful... i'm speechless... *tears* :D

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babydee1 March 29 2012, 01:02:24 UTC
*hands you a tissue* Glad you like, Sofia! :-)

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danisige March 29 2012, 01:27:26 UTC
Okay... it was fantastic, totally and completely fascinating.:D:D

I could visualize perfectly Chloe saying all this to Ollie, the words spilling out from the heart and Ollie there with eyes full of tears, completely moved and feeling the happiest man in the world.
They are married... Mr and Mrs Queen. Yayyyyyyy!! :)

And Ollie jumped into the water with Chloe in his arms!lol That's so their thing!;):D
Loved it!!!

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babydee1 March 31 2012, 10:09:04 UTC
"Okay... it was fantastic, totally and completely fascinating.:D:D"

Oh, I'm so glad you liked it, Dani! :-D

"I could visualize perfectly Chloe saying all this to Ollie, the words spilling out from the heart and Ollie there with eyes full of tears, completely moved and feeling the happiest man in the world.
They are married... Mr and Mrs Queen. Yayyyyyyy!! :)"

After the brush-over wedding that TPTB threw at our feet, I HAD to make this one special, yet very true to their amazing relationship. Judging by your reactions, I think this worked out quite well! :-)

"And Ollie jumped into the water with Chloe in his arms!lol That's so their thing!;):D"

Exactly!!! :-D

"Loved it!!!"

Thanks for commenting, babes! :-)

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purple_moon123 March 29 2012, 05:51:55 UTC
Love, love, love!!!!

The vows were amazing!!! And no I'm not crying I just have something in my eye!!!

Ok fine I'm bawling!!!!! but can you blame me those vows were AMAZING!!!!!!

“In a minute,” he whispered. He stared at Chloe in all her loveliness and committed the moment to his memory for life. She was as beautiful as she had always been, except for one small difference…

“Mrs Chloe Queen,” he breathed reverently. “My wife…” his thumbs brushed her cheeks. “My Queen.”

Heeeeee Who's gushing like a school girl??? That'd be me!!!!!

She nodded, a huge smile on her face as her eyes sparkled with joy. “Yeah,” she finally replied tremulously. “I am.”

“You’re my wife,” he whispered again.

“You’re my husband,” she said in a daze. “We’re married.”

“We’re married.” A huge smile crept across his face as his voice rose. “We’re married! Oh my God, we are fucking married!”

My babies are married!!!! EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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babydee1 March 31 2012, 10:05:25 UTC
"Love, love, love!!!!"

Thanks, thanks, thanks!!! :-D

"The vows were amazing!!! And no I'm not crying I just have something in my eye!!!"

Suuurrrrrre you do. ;-)

"Ok fine I'm bawling!!!!!"

I knew it!!! :-D

"...but can you blame me those vows were AMAZING!!!!!!!"

It was very them, wasn't it? *sighs* :-)

"Heeeeee Who's gushing like a school girl??? That'd be me!!!!!"

Oh, you go on ahead and gush, girl. Have fun! :-)

"My babies are married!!!! EHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH"

Yes indeed, they are - and I love it!!! :-D

Glad you liked it, my Sweet! *huggles*

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