Chlollie Fanfic: Beauty in the Breakdown V - Feeling Good
I go where the Muses take me, and today, the wind is blowing in the Chlollie direction. Whee! :-D
First chapter of the Fifth installment in the Beauty in the Breakdown Series, titled Feeling Good. I hope you like it!
NB: Three chapters tops. Please don’t laugh at me if once again, I’m unable to stick to projected fic lengths. :-/
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Lois' reaction to Chloe's "glow", Chloe's reaction to Clark's snide comment, heck Oliver in the car. Priceless, awesome, and just the thing to put a smile on my face.
As a side note, I like how you got the whole Clark and Lois finding out early.
*big hug* Thanks Dee, I really needed that.
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Happy I could make you smile, Sera! Hope whatever caused your freak-out has been resolved. :-D
"Lois' reaction to Chloe's "glow", Chloe's reaction to Clark's snide comment, heck Oliver in the car. Priceless, awesome, and just the thing to put a smile on my face."
So glad you liked it, hun!
"As a side note, I like how you got the whole Clark and Lois finding out early."
Done, dusted, out of the way and back to the Chlollie Goodness! :-P
"*big hug* Thanks Dee, I really needed that."
*huggles back* Anytime! :-)
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I absolutely this this whole series! Hehe :) This chapter was sucj a great start I can't wait for more! :)
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Props to the awesome jennyspring - she's amazing. :-)
"Second this is awesome! OMG you had everything in here!!! we got Chlollie banter..."
...always fun,
"Chlo-Lo..."
...also nice,
"...Clark being a jackass..."
par for the course!
"...and Chloe putting him in his place...OMG so epic!"
I love it when that happens. ;-)
"I absolutely *love* this whole series! Hehe :) This chapter was sucj a great start I can't wait for more! :)"
So glad you like it, Cori. Thanks as always for your lovely comments, and the initial inspiration! *hugs*
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I love Ollie's reactions when Lois and Clark were looking at him. heee.
Chlo-lo was very sweet I like it :).
And yayy for Chloe telling them that her sex glow was because of Ollie!
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Perfect timing for you, then! :-D
"I love Ollie's reactions when Lois and Clark were looking at him. heee."
Chloe's right, they deserved it for staring at him. And you know Ollie would totally react like that!!!
So glad you liked, it, Pau. Thanks for commenting! :-)
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Yup, Chloe's certainly settled into her new relationship well. Go Ollie! :-D
"I was glad to see Oliver going along with Chloe's need for things to be as perfect as possible on their night out. Chloe has some understandable insecurities that she's working through and I think it was great of him to go along with her even as he grumbled to let her know that it wasn't necessary. She needs someone who cares about her like that."
...and now she has him. Again, Go Ollie! :-)
"Lol at Lois being able to tell right off. Poor Chloe didn't stand a chance of getting out of there in two minutes. But it's nice to see that Lois is happy about Chloe getting to have sexy fun times. And I LMAO at Lois' comment about the dress she hasn't seen or stolen yet. lol"
I noticed on the show that they sometimes wear each other's jackets and coats, so it makes sense that they'd pilfer from each other's wardrobes every now and then! :-P
"And wow, Clark has some issues that he ( ... )
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With a chest like his, it's a done deal! :-D
"As for Chloe, you go girl. You put Clark in his place."
Clark totally got pwned, hee! I hope he dreams of Chlollie sex after that. He deserves it! :-P
Glad you like, jediyoda! :-)
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