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Chlollie Fanfic: Beauty in the Breakdown IV - Letting Go, Part 6

Feb 04, 2011 11:40

Chlollie update in the House!!!

Thought this would be a nice way to kick off Chloe’s return to the show (even though I shan’t be watching).

Somebody (can’t remember who) wanted to know what Oliver was thinking, well...this is it. In fact, it’s all Oliver’s thoughts here; there’s only three lines of dialogue in the entire chapter. Weird.

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chlollie, chloe, fallingin, smallville, rated:pg13, oliver, fanfic, beautyinthebreakdown

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eternal_moonie February 4 2011, 12:13:05 UTC

AWESOME new chapter sweetie!

babydee1 February 4 2011, 15:37:28 UTC

Thanks,Jan - as always! :-)

chlollielover February 4 2011, 12:34:52 UTC

I'm a huge, huge fan of your Chlollie stories. And this one is no exception.

I love how you can portrait their feelings and stay so true to the characters. It's really amazing!

*cuddles you*

I can't wait for the next one. They are just so sweet together! They complete each other!

Good work!

babydee1 February 4 2011, 15:40:23 UTC

"I'm a huge, huge fan of your Chlollie stories. And this one is no exception."

Aw, thanks hun! *blushes*

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babydee1 February 4 2011, 15:40:55 UTC

Many thanks, Stef - glad you like it! :-)

sxymami0909 February 4 2011, 14:21:55 UTC

Awwwwwwwwwwww D! I absolutely love it when peope delve into Oliver's head and his thoughts. And you do it oh so well! This chapter was great! And I love how much he cares and how scared he is and how much he cares! Love this! *hugs you* :-)

babydee1 February 4 2011, 15:43:12 UTC

"Awwwwwwwwwwww D! I absolutely love it when peope delve into Oliver's head and his thoughts. And you do it oh so well!"

Glad you think so, Cori! I feel he wasn't properly developed on the show, so I always relish the chances I get to provide him with layers and depth. :-)

"This chapter was great! And I love how much he cares and how scared he is and how much he cares!"

Hee! For someone who keeps insisting that Chloe not think about things too deeply, he's doing a whole lot of reflecting himself, isn't he? :-D

"Love this! *hugs you*"

*cuddles* :-)

geek_or_unique February 4 2011, 14:55:25 UTC

Amazing! I love when chapters are focus on the emotions, and that's was a great chapter.
I love this! :D

babydee1 February 4 2011, 15:36:04 UTC

Thank, Juliete! I was worried people might find it a bit boring, but I personally love delving into Ollie's mind, and fleshing him out a bit.

Although, with a body like that, I don't think any additional 'fleshing' is needed... ;-)

...I'll stop now before my mind hits the gutter completely!

Glad you like, and thanks for your kind comments! :-D