Chlollie Fanfic: Beauty in the Breakdown IV: Falling In, Part 5

Jan 09, 2011 20:13


Yoo-hoo!  Update in the house! Sorry, took a little longer than expected.

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Rated NC-17, so no minors, thanks.


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chlollie, chloe, fallingin, rated:nc17, smallville, oliver, fanfic, beautyinthebreakdown

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gabrielladusult January 9 2011, 22:41:48 UTC
Well...all I can think is that Chloe is going to mess this up with all her rules.

But in the mean time...WOW!

I love Chloe teasing Ollie about not being a pity lay. I mean seriously, dude, I know his ego doesn't ordinarily need stroking, but what woman wouldn't want that 24/7?

And his struggling for control and the whloe w/o condom experience was suitably intense.

I don't know what I'm going to do without your mind entertaining me on the Chlollie front (Not completely true, much as I love your stuff, we are lucky to have lots of good WIPs being updated here right now -- I just love the way you think!) Those other ships don't deserve you! ;)

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babydee1 January 10 2011, 06:08:45 UTC
"Well...all I can think is that Chloe is going to mess this up with all her rules."

*spoiler* She won't. ;-)

"But in the mean time...WOW!"

Thank you! :-D

" love Chloe teasing Ollie about not being a pity lay. I mean seriously, dude, I know his ego doesn't ordinarily need stroking, but what woman wouldn't want that 24/7?"

I know, right? *see icon*

"And his struggling for control and the whloe w/o condom experience was suitably intense."

Glad you like it, Gabi! :-)

"I don't know what I'm going to do without your mind entertaining me on the Chlollie front (Not completely true, much as I love your stuff, we are lucky to have lots of good WIPs being updated here right now -- I just love the way you think!)"

Aw! You're such a wonderful commenter, babes. Thanks so much for all you sweet words! :-)

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madlenita January 9 2011, 23:25:04 UTC
Thanks for this story, i love that Love is telling Chloe how is she beautiful...
And now i waiting for your Chlark story, especially Crisis....

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babydee1 January 10 2011, 06:10:16 UTC
Thanks, Maddie!

First updates will be The Perfect Gift, which is almost finished. I need to get at least one story off the table before the end of the week! :-)

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jediyoda99 January 10 2011, 00:01:31 UTC
Oliver is so attentive to Chloe. In this relationship, chloe is learning from Oliver so much and she is growing better as a person.

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babydee1 January 10 2011, 07:54:32 UTC
BINGO. I think having that huge Chlark meltdown and release at the start of it all went a very long way in helping her heal, and will greatly affect the development and outcome of the Chlollie relationship.

So glad you like it, babes! :)

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sxymami0909 January 10 2011, 00:13:04 UTC
*waves* Hey D! I loved this part it was beyond perfect. My head is spinning at the moment, I've had the worst headache all day, but I watched to make sure I left a comment to tell you how awesome this chapter was! :D

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babydee1 January 10 2011, 08:04:22 UTC
Aw, Cori! :)

Thanks for taking the time to leave such a lovely comment, even though you're feeling poorly. *cuddles*

So glad you like it, babes!

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chlarks_cupid January 10 2011, 00:19:00 UTC
jeez are you trying to kill me?!

PHWOAAARRR!
I Mean that part about him describing her skin as ice cream....uhhh Ollie we need to like clone you or someting!

PERFECTION, My fave chapter so far! im loving this.

Thanks so much for writing this hun!

Love it xxxxx

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babydee1 January 11 2011, 21:52:10 UTC
"jeez are you trying to kill me?!

PHWOAAARRR!"

Hee!!! I think PHWOAAARRR has to be my favourite word of the modern English Language!!! You just automatically fan yourself when you say it - at least, I do!!! :-D

" Mean that part about him describing her skin as ice cream....uhhh Ollie we need to like clone you or someting!"

There have been multiple requests for Ollie to be cloned in this post alone, so many so that we could easily form a quorum and submit it to a reputable cloning firm. We might be in with a chance!!! :-D

PERFECTION, My fave chapter so far! im loving this.

Thanks so much for writing this hun!

Love it xxxxx"

Your comments always bring me great joy and laughter, chlarks)cupid. Thanks so much for all the sunshine, and I'm so glad you like the story! *hugs*

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