"Pushing Wilson" a new kind of fic for me to write

[babyboyjon]

Title: "Pushing Wilson"
Author: livinlifejb(fanfiction.net) aka me babyboyjon
Pairing: House/Wilson
Rating: NC-17(for slash/abuse/rape)
Warning: non-con, rape, violence, character death
Spoilers: Wilson is with Sam. "Baggage" happened, but "Help Me" did not.
Summary: What happens when you push James Wilson too far?

Comments

[cuddyclothes]

I'm not a fan of violence (see "Epic Fic Is Epic") and to me, this sort of rape and non-con is disturbing. However, there is a school of writing that enjoys this sort of thing. I also don't think House would take this without a fight; in these stories he tends to start crying and wimping out, whereas IC House would fight back, hard and dirty. Just my opinion.

[babyboyjon]

i thought about that, but i also thought it would be too cliche or typical for Wilson to be on the receiving end. no i'm not a fan of this at all. i don't enjoy this kind of stuff, if that's what you thought. its was just simply, the idea came, i wrote it, the end. i might remove it. i feel shameful for having wrote the damn thing. =(

[cuddyclothes]

don't feel ashamed. As I said, there are large parts of the fandom that enjoy this kind of fic. You should put in the public disclaimer:
Warning: non-con, rape, violence, character death.

You might have already done so. That will draw in the readers who will love it. And don't feel ashamed. We all have dark feelings inside.

[babyboyjon]

i do feel ashamed because this isn't something i get some sick kick out of. and i don;t want people to think that. the idea came, i wrote, that's all. i don;t want to be thought of as some terrible person for writing this.

[lizzielizzie]

You can try posting this to dark_wilson, they would love it over there.

[babyboyjon]

ok, i will. thanks.

[superseal]

The way you wrote it was very good.

I'm going to mem it :)

[tomodachikiss]

I usually don't read non-con/rape. Nor death-fics. I did anyway, to give the writing a chance. Your way of storytelling is rather intrigueing. I liked the first half a lot. Wouldn't call it "rape" per se. Non-con fits better. I think there is a distinction. A small one but anyway. The anger seemed to be very pointless on Houses part. It would've worked better if properly explained. But the overall "happening" was believable and not so terrible how I imagined it before. If you'd tune it a notch down, I think, it might be actually fitting. I can easily see them fighting over something and letting the anger go that way. It reminds me of something I read in another fandom before. The anger thing I mean

[babyboyjon]

yeah writing the characters IC was not the focus. no i like con-crit. its all good. i really didn't want to do too much explaining about House's anger. i mean since when does House need a reason to be angry? and that was kind of the point. House was just pissed and Wilson was the closest punching bag. and it all flowed from there. ^_^

[tomodachikiss]

Japp, kinda got that! And this is exactly what you did well :) Just in case I didn't bring that over in my previous statement.

I also saw a few spelling mistakes, but nothing serious. But I'm not native and have loads more in my texts. So don't worry :)

[cresty_on_ry]

I thought it was very good. This was my first ever non-con/rape/death fic and I decided to try it out because, well, I like reading fic and it gives me ideas for my stories, and increases my fanfic repertoire. I completely understand why House was being an a-hole to his team, and I loved that Wilson took revenge for House being a jerk to him.

True, I did kinda think it was a little OOC for Wilson to kill himself, but it made sense in the grand scheme of things. The characterization of Wilson and House, save for the potentially of Wilson killing himself being a little bit OOC, was spot on and was very much like the show. I'm a huge characterization freak, and its a personal pet peeve of my when people don't make their characters realistic, and you really did that. :D

All in all, I thought it was great. And, as I said before, this was my first taste of these type of fics, so I hope what I said helps. :)

[babyboyjon]

actually yes this was a huge help. more a boost really, considering I've flipping out all day about what people were going to think of me for writing this.