Omg what have you done? My kokoro wasn't ready for this, okay? ;n; but lol I love how you played with the verse from Uncommitted and brought it around in such a creative way - it's like Yoochun isn't the only one being played, but the reader as well, and you don't even know how you got so involved, but you are and it's as interesting as it is painful and I hate you for always having such a wonderful way with words because this is beautiful and hey, how you doing? <33
lol omg I'm sorry for toying with your kokoro ;A; one of my fears about this fic was actually trying to make the fic...connectable, in a way, since I left so many aspects of it open ended, but I'm glad you found it an okay read <3 thank you for reading and I'm doing pretty good, actually! (when uni isn't kicking my ass :/) hope you're doing...good? :D
I was expected the worst and yet this is too beautiful to be angsty tragic so I'm going to believe that they will always meet up; never quit this 'game' they are supposedly play...
lol honestly I didn't really know what genre to stick this in so I kinda...just went with angst haha :D thank you for reading! (and in my own head, there comes a day when Junsu just can't wake up in the morning and Yoochun rolls over to find him still sleeping next to him and these too silly people finally come to terms with the fact that they do want to spend mornings, afternoons, nights, whole days with each other)
aww~~ i also love that junsu's the one leading this game... (or so you've led us to beliiiieve). junsu is so casual about his recklessness but yoochun is totally captivated. (who wouldn't be totally suckered by junsu's bright smile and smexy moves? i'm pretty dang sure that junsu's good for more than just one night. ^_~ ... two at least... kekeke.)
it's interesting because you'd think this kind of story would be confusing with its lack of backstory... but actually you've written it in such a way that it's a very self-contained and the history, what's going on when they're not in front of each other, is almost not important.
:D it can go a few ways, really. Maybe Junsu's the one losing here because he's the one that's holding all the cards and if he gives them all up, he'll have no one to blame but himself. He's definitely good for more than one night in my books though! I'm glad the lack of backstory didn't screw with you too much, I was a bit worried that things wouldn't make sense with all the sparseness and everything but yay for that not happening! Thank you so much for reading and commenting ♥
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it's interesting because you'd think this kind of story would be confusing with its lack of backstory... but actually you've written it in such a way that it's a very self-contained and the history, what's going on when they're not in front of each other, is almost not important.
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