Comments | baby_skies: push and pull

blurmeese in baby_skies

push and pull

Feb 25, 2011 21:19

top/jaejoong
smut
nc17
2275 words

( Sex with Yunho is nothing like this. )

pairing: top/jaejoong, length: +1000, genre: crossover, rating: nc17, genre:smut, type: oneshot, fandom: tvxq

Comments 37

under_an_oak February 25 2011, 13:38:05 UTC

/JUDGES YOU.

Love the rawness and the...the broken-ness that is both Jae and TOP WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO THE F4 YOU HO???

Makes me wonder why they're not together then :\

Also, I keep seeing Draco and Masaki in the sex .___. I'm sorry, I'm obsessed.

blurmeese February 25 2011, 13:43:13 UTC

/IS JUDGED

kasdjnak you ninjae superwoman I can't even baww thank you for reading my rot ;A; and dude I did tell you that I ended up typing Draco at some part right? My life. Our lives. Gods.

under_an_oak February 25 2011, 13:49:05 UTC

Your rot was wonderfully rot-ty and and warm and wet and squishy :D

I think it's because D&M haven't skanked in a while. Obviously we're facing withdrawals.

jaeluvsme February 25 2011, 13:45:34 UTC

Yunho is a pussy. TOP a dick. They'd be perfect for each other.

Love this like cray cray.

anthem4cruelty February 25 2011, 13:59:29 UTC

Yunho is a pussy. TOP a dick.

THIS!

blurmeese February 26 2011, 11:25:08 UTC

LOL THIS CALLS FOR A THREESOME NOW~ :D thank you darling ♥ ^3^

lovakissuholic February 25 2011, 14:10:33 UTC

i liked this so much. :)

blurmeese February 26 2011, 11:25:19 UTC

thank you for liking it~

savingsuperman February 25 2011, 14:12:35 UTC

...what is this.

savingsuperman February 25 2011, 14:12:57 UTC

LMAO I’M JOKING HOLY SHIT WOW HOOOOOOOO GOD. WOW OMG SHITTING BABIES OUT OF MY EARS RN I WAS ABOUT TO JUDGE YOU FOR THIS BUT OOOOH WOW MY GOODNESS TEARS ROLLING DOWN MY FACE THAT’S HOT IN THE MOST SCREWED UP WAY POSSIBLE WOW JO WHOAAAAA WHAT OMG!!!11!1!!!1!!! THAT WAS AMAZING ;A ( ... )

blurmeese February 26 2011, 11:31:33 UTC

OH MY GOD LOL ANNI I'M AWARDING YOU THE BEST COMMENT EVER PRIZE OMG ;A; I SHOULD WRITE MORE FOR YOU IF I CAN GET THIS KIND OF FLAILAGE TROLOLOLOL

and kasjdnak oh god I'm just glad you liked this, I really had no idea how to write TOP except as this badass motherfucker so uhm yeah idek my characterization just extends to about that. Heh. Characterization. I hope you're wearing your panties back~ Also, I really hadn't planned on putting Yunho in at all so I'm glad that worked out as well since my inner (...or not so inner) Yunjae stan was all DUDE NO YOU CAN'T WRITE JAEJOONG WITHOUT YUNHO so yeah there he is, being a pussy. Sorry dude.

<3 Oh darling for you, I'll never stop writing ♥ Chu, soulmate-sshi ^3^