Comments | b_hallward: Fic: As a Prism Breaks Light (Merlin/Arthur)

b_hallward

Fic: As a Prism Breaks Light (Merlin/Arthur)

Mar 24, 2009 13:36

Summary: Some things come easily to them. And some things don't.

( As a Prism Breaks Light )

fixed-forms, tense: present, pairing:arthur/merlin, drabble cycle, fanfic, words: 100, fanfic: merlin, merlin, words: 100x8, drabbles

Comments 26

mossylawn March 24 2009, 19:05:15 UTC

This was brilliant.

Arthur thinks of how Merlin's body moved under his, the press of impatient heels against his back, that strange hanging moment where it seemed everything he felt or wanted was defined by Merlin's response, praise and orders and deep stuttery moans.

I am quite sure that my heart melted alongside my brain when I read this. You write porn and make it so much more than porn. God

b_hallward March 26 2009, 20:32:37 UTC

Thank you! I still find porn nerve-racking to write and I'm just vastly relieved when it comes off all right.

mossylawn March 27 2009, 08:53:06 UTC

It does, it does. I love how it's never just smut with you. There's always something buzzling right underneath the surface and it steals my breath away everytime.

myrimidryad March 24 2009, 19:56:12 UTC

It's like...poetry...but better, because I generally don't like poetry. Beautiful either way.

b_hallward March 25 2009, 07:01:21 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked this.

burkesl17 March 24 2009, 20:15:06 UTC

Ooh that was pretty!

b_hallward March 25 2009, 07:01:32 UTC

Thank you!

fatchickengirl March 24 2009, 20:23:41 UTC

this is proper erotics no other word for it

b_hallward March 26 2009, 19:50:48 UTC

Thank you! That's exactly what I was going for. I'm so glad you like it.

archaeologist_d March 24 2009, 20:36:57 UTC

Loved all the drabbles. Quite lovely!

b_hallward March 25 2009, 07:01:55 UTC

Thank you!