Drabble: Aubade (YnM, Tsuzuki&Hisoka)

Jun 01, 2012 02:38

Aubade
Summary: Life can take so long to climb clear of its wrong beginnings, and may never.The house around them had fallen in on itself as decay slowly ate everything. The ghost faded away, still pleading. Between Tsuzuki's fingers, the fuda echoed with spent magic ( Read more... )

words: 100, fanfic, ynm, tense: past, fanfic: ynm, drabbles

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wordsofastory June 1 2012, 16:53:58 UTC
OMG, you're posting! Sorry. I was actually just thinking of you the other day, and wondered how you were doing.

Anyway, drabble! I really, really like this. I love how the dialouge works so well for both the overt situation and the unstated situation between Tsuzuki and Hisoka; I love the detail about gentleness. I really, really love the title; it's absolutely perfect. Beautiful fic.

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b_hallward June 1 2012, 20:42:24 UTC
I was just thinking of you too! I'm doing well -- though I'll be even better after graduation next week :)

I've always liked aubades/albas as a genre -- though this was mostly to see if I could still write anything at all given the amount of dry academic/technical writing I've been doing of late. I'm so delighted you liked it!

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lady_ganesh June 2 2012, 01:25:40 UTC
Some of your drabbles are like looking at sculptures made from bone. You do so much, so elegantly, with so few words.

(Also, it is so nice to see you posting.)

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b_hallward June 7 2012, 21:02:43 UTC
Thank you! I hope to be around more now that I'm out of school.

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